People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

As we know that the humans are closely attatch with the other people becuase we lives in a social country in which we can easily attatch with the people and we can easily trust on the other people. We attatched with the people by emotions, sometimes effect of this emotions impact adversly.

Emotions is a one thing which is not easily seperable,but it is increase day by day and sometime we pouring in that emotions and we forget our main aim. We have to take our all decisons officiously not with the personly.

However sometime some people make decisions based on emotion and after doing this they will justify their decisions with spurious logic. And the result of that decison is very poor. By doing this sometimes we have to face many problems which are not easily solved or its impact is so critical.

In contradict to that statement sometime make decision with the using emotions we maintain our relations with our friends and many other.. By doing this if some problem arise we can easily solve it by taking help of our friends and we dont face some hillarious effect of that decision.

The last example is that as we Mr.Narendra Modi the prime minister of india,who was c.m of gujarat before became the p.m of our country. If after become p.m he will continues his work toward only gujarat this will prevaricate our nation.As a being of p.m he never pouring in emotions which are attatched with gujaraties but his all actions are towards the benefitis of our nation.

So we should never take decision by being emotional and we should never justify those decisions with spurious logic, it will become a poor decision so we have to avoid this. And we should change our thinking that by being emotional we can not acheive the success we should be professional in taking decisions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: live
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Suggestion: , but
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...nt sometime make decision with the using emotions we maintain our relations with ...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...elations with our friends and many other.. By doing this if some problem arise we ...
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Suggestion: don't
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.195195195195 0.240241500013 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.162162162162 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0600600600601 0.0880659088768 68% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0720720720721 0.0497285424764 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.114114114114 0.0444667217837 257% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.147147147147 0.12292977631 120% => OK
Participles: 0.039039039039 0.0406280797675 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.43170458749 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.012012012012 0.030933414821 39% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0990990990991 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.036036036036 0.0249443105267 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015015015015 0.0148568991511 101% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1798.0 2732.02544248 66% => OK
No of words: 315.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70793650794 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.336507936508 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.234920634921 0.280924506359 84% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.155555555556 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0920634920635 0.132149295362 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43170458749 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 219.290929204 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457142857143 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.0913474245 55.4138127331 81% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 26.25 23.380412469 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.738711072 59.4972553346 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.833333333 141.124799967 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 23.380412469 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.674092028746 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 49.7420634921 51.4728631049 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.09482758621 1.64882698954 66% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212169956211 0.391690518653 54% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150096693318 0.123202303941 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0929682828482 0.077325440228 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.692395921618 0.547984918172 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184746299562 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103004243486 0.161403998019 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113284046339 0.0892212321368 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.232689123043 0.385218514788 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0523746028423 0.0692045440612 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131779438873 0.275328986314 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931553402076 0.0653680567796 143% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.4325221239 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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