People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
The issue here of whether or not people are poor decision makers as they make decisions based on their emotions is a contentious one. While each side has it's strengths and weaknesses, I believe decisions which are based on logic rather than emotions are good decisions.
First, decisions which have to be taken at the very crucial stages of life like choosing a stream of education for further studies should be based on logic as all criteria have to be considered while selecting a stream. Questions like Are you interested in taking that course? what is the
future of stream? or Are there ample job opportunities? should be answered before making the selection. If a student selects stream just because his friend has selected it, he would not do good in that field. This would then be a decision made on the basis of an emotion called "friendship".
Second, one of the most important decisions of life is choosing a life partner. Your husband/wife is the person with whom you will be spending the rest of your life and this decision has to be taken oneself. If the decision is left on parents and you blindly follow it and at the later stage you realize that you and your partner are not compatible, it would spoils your life further. If before marriage itself you made all the analysis then such situation wouldn't have occurred.
Third, if scientists who have made great inventions in their life would have applied emotions in their discovery then there would probably be no new technology at our disposal. If Wright brothers would have applied logic then there would be no invention of planes.
Some may argue that all decisions need not be only based on logic. If a small child is facing trouble adjusting in the school, even though the school is eminent for its teaching and other things, parents would make the decision of changing the school, only because their child is not comfortable. They do not give a second thought to it because for them their child comes first. Such decisions even though are made on emotions but there is logic involved that there are other schools too which are as good as the previous one and the child would be comfortable going there.
In conclusion, decisions based on logic are well reasoned out and though are mostly right as much thought is given behind it. Decisions are based on emotions are done in haste so chances of them being wrong are more. For these reasons I agree that people who make decisions based on emotions are poor decision makers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216842105263 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.197894736842 0.157235817809 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0631578947368 0.0880659088768 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0715789473684 0.0497285424764 144% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0694736842105 0.0444667217837 156% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134736842105 0.12292977631 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0715789473684 0.0406280797675 176% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55054830795 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00842105263158 0.030933414821 27% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00210526315789 0.0016655270985 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0778947368421 0.0997080785238 78% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0273684210526 0.0249443105267 110% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147368421053 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2515.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 437.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75514874142 6.0361032391 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.311212814645 0.366273622748 85% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231121281465 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.151029748284 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0823798627002 0.132149295362 62% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55054830795 2.79330140395 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 219.290929204 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475972540046 0.48968727796 97% => OK
Word variations: 52.7739453936 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.8636363636 23.380412469 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2527625427 59.4972553346 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.318181818 141.124799967 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8636363636 23.380412469 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.674092028746 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.9757645101 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.24844720497 1.64882698954 76% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292598894086 0.391690518653 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.127731434582 0.123202303941 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.107188294597 0.077325440228 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.537144992528 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.207469070691 0.149214159877 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110419103343 0.161403998019 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120722438767 0.0892212321368 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.196855950578 0.385218514788 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0490563612184 0.0692045440612 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184128310448 0.275328986314 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156930155521 0.0653680567796 240% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.66592920354 136% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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