People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Decision making is the art of taking correct decisions, often equanimity, in important situations. The given prompt asserts that people who justify decisions, taken previously based on emotions, later with logic are poor decision makers. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the assertion and argue that we must strive to arrive at a decision based on logical reasoning and thorough analysis for these reasons.
First, decisions must be be taken on the premise of logic, rather than than emotions, beforehand. We are all aware of the fact that "Time and tide waits for none" and that it is always better to discern the whole situation and then arrive upon a decision. We must take stock of all aspects that concern the decision. For instance,if a company decides to provide free service to locals based on their attachement to their loyal customer base then it might lead to huge losses and prove to be not a 'wise' decision in long run. Thus, we must discern the situation based on merits as "There's no use in crying over spilled milk".
Furthermore, we must not let emotions get over our consciousness. It is good to have an emotional quotient, however, it must be limited and used appropriately. Research has consistently demonstrated that decisions, based on emotions, often prove to be inept for the particular situation. For instance, consider a student about to enroll into college. Choice's of one college major is not a trivial one. But, the students ends up pursuing a profession of their parents, just based on emotional attachment to that field. If the kid is inept in that particular field, it dramatically enervates the chances for his/her success. Thus, we must control and emotions and not let them interfere our decision-making process.
Finally, all decisions must be evaluated based on the the prevailing conditions at that time. Essentially, the rationale of the decision must be based on the premise of merits and demerits. We know that every coin has two sides. We must evaluate and analyze both, the positives and negatives of the decision. If the positive outweight the negatives, then the decision can be taken into contention. This is perhaps the most basic and easy method of decision making. Moreover, a plethora of factors lead the decision making, in specific fields such as engineering, finance and medicine. Thus, the factors pertaining to the specific fields must be taken into account for decision making.
Of course, some might argue that it is often the exigency of the situation that calls into account taking decision based on emotions. It is true in some specific situations such as war, disaster management etc. Howover, in most of the cases, decisions which are based on logical considerations are propitious. Therefore, we must discern the situation based on logic reasoning and then take appropriate decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...these reasons. First, decisions must be be taken on the premise of logic, rather t...
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...ance, consider a student about to enroll into college. Choices of one college maj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, of course, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2413.0 2235.4752809 108% => OK
No of words: 471.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12314225053 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8503372514 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 215.323595506 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490445859873 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 765.0 704.065955056 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8252907771 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1785714286 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8214285714 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10714285714 5.21951772744 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247371570886 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724712221683 0.0831039109588 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671516099059 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161914142064 0.150359130593 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080910898366 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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