People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Emotions are an inherent part of human nature and an important characteristic that distinguishes one individual from another. These emotions can be put to use in variety of circumstances in our daily lives and influence our decision making capacity as well. However, how these emotions influence our decision making can greatly affect ones circumstance.
For the most part a lack of emotions while making decisions and thinking about the problem at hand logically would be a better bet, take for example the current scenario taking place in India which at present appears to be in a state of verbal war with its neighbor Pakistan. The recent attacks by Pakistan on India lead to country wide resentment among the citizens of India. The situation seems so delicate that a war between the two countries would seem inevitable at glance. However, even in this scenario, the Indian diplomats setting aside their anger, pursued a very tactical approach to isolate Pakistan globally. Had this gone the other way around with emotions taking hold of oneself it would have certainly lead to war and deaths of millions.
The above is one such example albeit on a global scale where had emotions gotten the better of people, it would have lead to a catastrophic decision which although justified would definitely not have been the best course of action. Hence, we can say that taking decisions based on emotions although justified by logical reasoning would not lead to a good decision and a better decision can be reached if a problem at hand is analyzed objectively rather than emotionally.
However, in stark contrast there are certain situations that life presents us with, where emotion may lead to a better overall decision even though logically it may look avoidable.
Take for example giving money to a extremely poor person or offering food to a person clearly in an emaciated condition. Such an act logically is unnecessary as you are simply giving your hard earned money or food to someone else. However, it is these emotions that make us human, emotions that help in understanding the situations of other people and offering unconditional help to others.
Therefore, in conclusion it can be said that although not involving emotions and thinking logically may be a good approach in our daily lives and help us in achieving our goals, but there will always be certain circumstances during ones life where taking decisions emotionally would also hold good.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.236781609195 0.240241500013 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.154022988506 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0965517241379 0.0880659088768 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0735632183908 0.0497285424764 148% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0413793103448 0.0444667217837 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12183908046 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0574712643678 0.0406280797675 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72662851811 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0275862068966 0.030933414821 89% => OK
Particles: 0.00229885057471 0.0016655270985 138% => OK
Determiners: 0.0850574712644 0.0997080785238 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0367816091954 0.0249443105267 147% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0229885057471 0.0148568991511 155% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2467.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 407.0 452.878318584 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06142506143 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.383292383292 0.366273622748 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.289926289926 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218673218673 0.200843997647 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115479115479 0.132149295362 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72662851811 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 219.290929204 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515970515971 0.48968727796 105% => OK
Word variations: 57.5169029591 55.4138127331 104% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 27.1333333333 23.380412469 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4493254857 59.4972553346 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.466666667 141.124799967 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 23.380412469 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.866666666667 0.674092028746 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 56.125962326 51.4728631049 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.54700854701 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287139996102 0.391690518653 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.141872531147 0.123202303941 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.103285215859 0.077325440228 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.629302804051 0.547984918172 115% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.177933450715 0.149214159877 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105777783077 0.161403998019 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473647074106 0.0892212321368 53% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.172160400493 0.385218514788 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0805060368178 0.0692045440612 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144241778918 0.275328986314 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648868066987 0.0653680567796 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.