People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Our life is dependent upon the decisions we make.Good decisions leads to success in life and bad decisions will often ruin our life.Hence making a good decision is important in everyone's life whether it may be professional or personal decision.A These decisions must not be influenced by our emotions.People who often make decisions carried by emotions are o poor decision makers because of many reasons.
Firstly people who make decisions based on emotion don't consider all aspects before arriving to conclusion.A good decision making not only involves emotions but also many aspects like it's future consequences,ability to become successful it's pros and cons etc.All these factors must be considered before arriving to a conclusion.But people who make decisions based on emotion don't consider all these aspects and their decision often lead to unviable consequences. In fact people will loose the ability to think about other aspects when they are carried by emotions. For example
Secondly people who make decisions based on emotions make haste decisions.Generally emotions are
expressed immediately after problem is presented.These emotions seek an immediate solution which inhabits people from carefully examination which requires time. Without careful considerations the decision leads to failure.
Additionally people who make decisions carried by emotions are easily influenced by people and circumstances.A Good decision must not be influenced by any circumstances or by other person because the decision working for particular situation may not work for other situation and sometimes other persons may influence us for their personal benefit leading to wrong decision.For example if a judge is often influenced by emotions a convict may convince the judge that he is not guilty through his innocent and crying face.
Thus people who make their decisions carried away by emotions are poor decision makers as they don't consider all the factors,make haste decisions and are often influenced by people and circumstances negatively.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'thus', 'for example', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275 0.240241500013 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.20625 0.157235817809 131% => OK
Adjectives: 0.090625 0.0880659088768 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.06875 0.0497285424764 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046875 0.0444667217837 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.1125 0.12292977631 92% => OK
Participles: 0.065625 0.0406280797675 162% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.16184045328 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.025 0.030933414821 81% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.05 0.0997080785238 50% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.028125 0.0249443105267 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.028125 0.0148568991511 189% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2172.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 309.0 452.878318584 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.02912621359 6.0361032391 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.58838876751 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.433656957929 0.366273622748 118% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.36569579288 0.280924506359 130% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.271844660194 0.200843997647 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.165048543689 0.132149295362 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16184045328 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 219.290929204 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491909385113 0.48968727796 100% => OK
Word variations: 49.1436006953 55.4138127331 89% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 44.1428571429 23.380412469 189% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 164.903434946 59.4972553346 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 310.285714286 141.124799967 220% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1428571429 23.380412469 189% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 0.674092028746 276% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.21349557522 480% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 80.7124364309 51.4728631049 157% => OK
Elegance: 1.40776699029 1.64882698954 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365901369925 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139126212443 0.123202303941 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.108747077785 0.077325440228 141% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.728153334845 0.547984918172 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.328009161431 0.149214159877 220% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197294012073 0.161403998019 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113635503373 0.0892212321368 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.206548321874 0.385218514788 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109284155578 0.0692045440612 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244586356223 0.275328986314 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123293761246 0.0653680567796 189% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.