People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
People today encounter with a myriad of situation every day, where they are required to take action based on their decisions. Given the limited time that they have at their disposal, it is possible that they feel inclined to make decisions based on their emotions. However, this may not lead to propitious situations and to further claim that their decisions were logic based is no excuse.
Students today are asked to choose a major in college based on their experiences so far in high school. It may not always be possible to arrive at a logical way to choose a major. It is possible that there is some emotional quotient involved in choosing their major. For example, if a student is the child of a couple of computer scientists it is possible he/she feels inclined to pursue a discipline in the same. However, it is possible that the student might have found it to be not a good fit for him/her later in college. In order to realise what went wrong while choosing a major, the student must consider an emotional inclination to pick the discipline he chose. Else, he/she may never truly realise the reason for the bad decision. Without truly recognising all the factors that persuaded him to the decision will continue to affect his future decisions.
One of the choices that people tend to make are to choose the organisation they prefer to work at. Yet again there might be several factors involved in choosing so. A purely logical one could be choose one where the person could advance his/her career to the best possible level. However, there might be other factors that might persuade a person in choosing so. The choice of city, the commute time to work or it could be because they could stay close to people they are emotionally related with. Any choice in the above are not bad until the person realises the actual reason behind making such a choice.
It is difficult to always know, given the complex nature of human kind, to be sure that a decision being made is free of any emotion. However, in order to become better at making decisions one needs to hold him/herself accountable for the decisions made in the right way by identifying various factors such as an emotional bias that were involved in doing so. Failing to do so, and defending their decision to be purely a logical one would only make them bad decision makers.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.179372197309 0.240241500013 75% => OK
Verbs: 0.201793721973 0.157235817809 128% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0964125560538 0.0880659088768 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0560538116592 0.0497285424764 113% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0605381165919 0.0444667217837 136% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.103139013453 0.12292977631 84% => OK
Participles: 0.0627802690583 0.0406280797675 155% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.42723487564 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0560538116592 0.030933414821 181% => Less infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0964125560538 0.0997080785238 97% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0313901345291 0.0249443105267 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0156950672646 0.0148568991511 106% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2348.0 2732.02544248 86% => OK
No of words: 413.0 452.878318584 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68523002421 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329297820823 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.230024213075 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154963680387 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0726392251816 0.132149295362 55% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42723487564 2.79330140395 87% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 219.290929204 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479418886199 0.48968727796 98% => OK
Word variations: 52.3049654495 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.65 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6284204087 59.4972553346 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 141.124799967 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.65 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.35 0.674092028746 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 43.6524213075 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.08450704225 1.64882698954 66% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124207188495 0.391690518653 32% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129598701632 0.123202303941 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.071153907512 0.077325440228 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510417053345 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.118155472763 0.149214159877 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528698869173 0.161403998019 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593261896932 0.0892212321368 66% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383113878852 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0450877435158 0.0692045440612 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109271036202 0.275328986314 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737484981898 0.0653680567796 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.