People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

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People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.

I agree with the issue being stated above that people who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decision with logic are poor decision makers

There are number of factors on which a decision should be based upon namely: it should be rational, all the consequences should be taken in mind while making a decision, it should not just benefit personally or to one person.

When the person is in emotional state then he/she is in different state of mind, which means that person is thinking with feelings that have effected him/her in any way. The feelings and emotions are controlling the mind which makes brain paralyse to think in definitive direction. We can see from the decisions made by Government of India, Parliament comes to a conclusion for anything after all the discussions which includes ramifications of the decision to be made. Moreover, slow and time taking decision which is taken by mind and not heart are the best decisions. Slow and logical decision are the best decisions ever taken. We can take an example of Abraham Lincoln, he always took the decision after thinking about the consequences which made him the best decision maker.

Although, on the other hand if we take an example of Mr. Trump, I think he takes decisions from heart, emotionally. He took a major step of banning selected community immigrants in his country which is a bad decision he took emotionally. In emotion we always think for our benefit. Likewise, Trump thought in benefit of his country people, which in turn will effect the relations between countries around the globe. Trump made the decision in a hurry, which was not logical. He made the decision and then he justified it with logic which makes him a poor decision maker.

Hence, we should always think rationally, apply logic, noting down the effects after decision only we should make decision. Decision made emotionally and put logic afterwards makes no sense. Thus, poor decisions will be made calling the person poor decision maker.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 360, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... his country people, which in turn will effect the relations between countries around ...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, likewise, moreover, so, then, thus, while, after all, i think, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 338.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95266272189 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54600883517 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497041420118 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1989869995 60.3974514979 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.625 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 5.21951772744 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461043746311 0.243740707755 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181316195417 0.0831039109588 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136010018314 0.0758088955206 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341595217944 0.150359130593 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.210303453517 0.0667264976115 315% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.8971910112 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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