People's attitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings
than by society as a whole.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with
the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Even though man has made many discoveries and inventions, factors effecting
thinking is always been a mystery. myriad of factors and experiances can shape
thinking. Making an idea and attitude unpredictable by considering few aspects.
Society can affect thinking but in a direct way, the experiances earned by living and
wisdom spark a tought. So immediate situations and surroundings have greater
effect than society.
Present situation and and surroundings are considerations that brain
processess to give a thought. Immediate situation is the target problem, getting out of
it is the primary task. If the individual in in a foreign location away from the society he
behaves differently and society he came from does not posess any rules and
conditions to the individual. To this end, attitude is independent of society.
Probibility of having diverse attitudes in a single society is oftenseen. A
brave teatotler and a timid sober can be seen in same society. Because society is
collective but the situation and surroundings are uniquel. Mostly, it is the unique
situations are those which shape the attitude. As stated braver individual can face
situations that are unique to him which made him brave. It will be a contrast in case of
sober. so attitude of brave informed from his experiances makes him to face the
situation. So it is not collective behaviour drives thought but situations faced and
interactions are those on which attitude depends on.
Thus, to say society can have effect on attitude but that is limited. Most of
the times it is attitude which influences itself, interprets the raw information favourable
to it.
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...iad of factors and experiances can shape thinking. Making an idea and attitude un...
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...ts. Society can affect thinking but in a direct way, the experiances earned by living and ...
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...ay, the experiances earned by living and wisdom spark a tought. So immediate situ...
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...he experiances earned by living and wisdom spark a tought. So immediate situations...
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...situations and surroundings have greater effect than society. Present situation...
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...tions and surroundings have greater effect than society. Present situation and a...
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...ffect than society. Present situation and and surroundings are considerations that br...
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...rroundings are considerations that brain processess to give a thought. Immediate ...
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...dings are considerations that brain processess to give a thought. Immediate situation ...
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...on is the target problem, getting out of it is the primary task. If the individua...
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... the target problem, getting out of it is the primary task. If the individual ...
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...ting out of it is the primary task. If the individual in in a foreign location...
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... is the primary task. If the individual in in a foreign location away from the societ...
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...oreign location away from the society he behaves differently and society he came ...
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... came from does not posess any rules and conditions to the individual. To this en...
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... from does not posess any rules and conditions to the individual. To this end, attitud...
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...udes in a single society is oftenseen. A brave teatotler and a timid sober can be...
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...in a single society is oftenseen. A brave teatotler and a timid sober can be seen...
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...imid sober can be seen in same society. Because society is collective but the situa...
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...seen in same society. Because society is collective but the situation and surroun...
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...in same society. Because society is collective but the situation and surroundings are ...
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...gs are uniquel. Mostly, it is the unique situations are those which shape the att...
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...e uniquel. Mostly, it is the unique situations are those which shape the attitude. As ...
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...ons are those which shape the attitude. As stated braver individual can face s...
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...de. As stated braver individual can face situations that are unique to him which ...
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...s stated braver individual can face situations that are unique to him which made him b...
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... brave. It will be a contrast in case of sober. so attitude of brave informed fro...
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...ill be a contrast in case of sober. so attitude of brave informed from his exp...
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...om his experiances makes him to face the situation. So it is not collective behav...
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Suggestion: Situation
...s experiances makes him to face the situation. So it is not collective behaviour driv...
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... drives thought but situations faced and interactions are those on which attitude...
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Suggestion: Interactions
...es thought but situations faced and interactions are those on which attitude depends on....
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...on attitude but that is limited. Most of the times it is attitude which influence...
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...nterprets the raw information favourable to it.
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...rets the raw information favourable to it.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246575342466 0.240241500013 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.184931506849 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0890410958904 0.0880659088768 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0342465753425 0.0497285424764 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0445205479452 0.0444667217837 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0993150684932 0.12292977631 81% => OK
Participles: 0.0479452054795 0.0406280797675 118% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00070657065 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239726027397 0.030933414821 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0924657534247 0.0997080785238 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0205479452055 0.0249443105267 82% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0205479452055 0.0148568991511 138% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1710.0 2732.02544248 63% => OK
No of words: 266.0 452.878318584 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.42857142857 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.398496240602 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.315789473684 0.280924506359 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.236842105263 0.200843997647 118% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161654135338 0.132149295362 122% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00070657065 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 219.290929204 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 54.1237075639 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.380412469 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3492523558 59.4972553346 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 141.124799967 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 23.380412469 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.210526315789 0.674092028746 31% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.94800884956 404% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 40.0 5.21349557522 767% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 45.5789473684 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.49350649351 1.64882698954 91% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278447086297 0.391690518653 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112293795853 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0686014274878 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.665166884972 0.547984918172 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.278370182032 0.149214159877 187% => Sentences are changing often in a paragraphs.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101441120285 0.161403998019 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596569097816 0.0892212321368 67% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.101563577437 0.385218514788 26% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0535744428072 0.0692045440612 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998515862597 0.275328986314 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576850431422 0.0653680567796 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88274336283 246% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.