A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
A person who commits crime knowingly or unknowingly does not matter to claim that he is criminal. But if we go deep while examining his intention behind the crime or situations which made him do the crime then it may be possible to decide, crime is intentional or unintentional. But here there are chances- any criminal can portray himself as if his crime was out of innocence.
crime has various possible routes. It may be murder, rape, perfidy, administrative level crimes etc. Different people commits various type of crimes. If a leader has committed a crime by using his power then you should definitely consider it as a deliberate crime and all his civil rights should be seized and he should not get any benefit from his or her own labour. If an intelligent person, example Mr.Jordan Belfort, who belied the situation of share market and deceived the thousands of gullible rich people. His actions actually questioned the integrity of rich American's. But once he is accused of his crime FBI took very little time to prove him guilty and all his properties, social rights, money etc whatever benefit he got from his labour of crime. Best way to seize anyone's civil rights is to imprison him for very long time.
On the other hand, we should think about the person who has committed any crime, who doesn't know that his actions are criminal- jumping of signal though it is a crime it is not feasible to tell that he has broken the social contract and it's not suggested to seize all his rights, but it should be definitely punishable by some penalty or imprisonment for few days.
Breaking of social contract by committing a know crime should not be tolerated. If the Punishment for such crime is extreme there are possibilities of reduction of such crime just by criminals fearing from loosing his/her civil rights. But punishment for crimes which doesn't break social contract should not be extreme.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Crime
...s if his crime was out of innocence. crime has various possible routes. It may be ...
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Line 3, column 406, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Jordan
...r. If an intelligent person, example Mr.Jordan Belfort, who belied the situation of sh...
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Line 3, column 761, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...enefit he got from his labour of crime. Best way to seize anyones civil rights is to...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...person who has committed any crime, who doesnt know that his actions are criminal- jum...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested seizing'.
Suggestion: suggested seizing
... broken the social contract and its not suggested to seize all his rights, but it should be defini...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eaking of social contract by committing a know crime should not be tolerated. If the P...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...rights. But punishment for crimes which doesnt break social contract should not be ext...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'while', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216901408451 0.240241500013 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.169014084507 0.157235817809 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107042253521 0.0880659088768 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535211267606 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0901408450704 0.0444667217837 203% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107042253521 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0338028169014 0.0406280797675 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.61908034604 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0197183098592 0.030933414821 64% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0591549295775 0.0997080785238 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0281690140845 0.0249443105267 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0197183098592 0.0148568991511 133% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1910.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 329.0 452.878318584 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80547112462 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352583586626 0.366273622748 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249240121581 0.280924506359 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.161094224924 0.200843997647 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106382978723 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61908034604 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534954407295 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 56.5500905343 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9333333333 23.380412469 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4905651171 59.4972553346 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.333333333 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 23.380412469 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.533333333333 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 46.8573454914 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.14414414414 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401904639626 0.391690518653 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.118189089627 0.123202303941 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0748517840598 0.077325440228 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.48668887978 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.219933040398 0.149214159877 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13816063569 0.161403998019 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925949505947 0.0892212321368 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.354893023512 0.385218514788 92% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0456173003071 0.0692045440612 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277754990167 0.275328986314 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544423584308 0.0653680567796 83% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 13.5995575221 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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