A person who knowingly commits a crime has broken the social contract and should not retain any civil rights or the right to benefit from his or her own labor.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The issue that the person should not retain any civil rights, who knowingly commits a crime is a contentious one. Though both sides have their strengths and weaknesses, I believe that he should be given punishment for his bad deeds but he should not be deprived of the benefit from his own labor or any other civil rights.
Whenever a person commits crime knowingly he is either going through some mental trauma or he has some psychological problem. There might be many reasons behind his act. If the person was not taught the difference between a criminal act and a normal work, maybe because he had no parents or was not educated enough, leads to him performing such precarious and deleterious deeds.
Let's take an example of person who has done robbery in a bank. He was in full senses when he did this theft. Thus he was aware of his act. So in this case, if the robber was caught and handed to the police and if a case was filed against him, it is the responsibility of the judiciary to find out the real reason of him committing this malevolent act. If he had been taught robbery only from his childhood, we cannot blame him for his act and occlude him from all his civil rights. Instead a punishment which makes him realize his mistake and which makes him a better person should be given.
If we restrain the criminal from his civil rights and do not benefit him from his own labor then What is the difference between him and us? I agree that he has broken the social contract but there could be other way in which we can punish him. If we deprive him of his rights, then he will lose all reasons for staying alive, which would worsen his condition even further.Instead, if we consider the above example, the person must have robbed the bank because he must be not having enough money for his survival or he must be not getting job, so in this case if he gets a job and he is also getting money for his hard work, then the thought of robbery would not come in his mind.
But there is also another side to this, some crimes like molestation, rape, eve teasing are so malicious that the only punishment to such people should be life imprisonment or even hang until death. They should not be given any right whatsoever. If such people are set free then common man will lose credence from our judiciary system. Also looking at the extent of punishment for such crimes, people would be scared with even the thought of committing it.
In conclusion, depending on the type of crime the person should be allowed to retain his civil rights or no. For such reasons, I believe that all people who commit crime should not be deprived of their rights and benefits of their own labor but the ones whose crime has no other punishment except life imprisonment should not be allowed their rights.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.196363636364 0.240241500013 82% => OK
Verbs: 0.172727272727 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0727272727273 0.0880659088768 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0581818181818 0.0497285424764 117% => OK
Pronouns: 0.107272727273 0.0444667217837 241% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.109090909091 0.12292977631 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0545454545455 0.0406280797675 134% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35666045917 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0109090909091 0.030933414821 35% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00181818181818 0.0016655270985 109% => OK
Determiners: 0.0927272727273 0.0997080785238 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0381818181818 0.0249443105267 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.02 0.0148568991511 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2798.0 2732.02544248 102% => OK
No of words: 510.0 452.878318584 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4862745098 6.0361032391 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75217629947 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.290196078431 0.366273622748 79% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.174509803922 0.280924506359 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0921568627451 0.200843997647 46% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0627450980392 0.132149295362 47% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.35666045917 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 219.290929204 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.443137254902 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.8100000224 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 25.5 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.6667333333 59.4972553346 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.9 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.674092028746 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.21349557522 153% => OK
Readability: 42.9509803922 51.4728631049 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.06451612903 1.64882698954 65% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4197421467 0.391690518653 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112825454751 0.123202303941 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0754606245791 0.077325440228 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530299673907 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.196487092971 0.149214159877 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156205815685 0.161403998019 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104089641313 0.0892212321368 117% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.310391162148 0.385218514788 81% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106165288424 0.0692045440612 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269898365038 0.275328986314 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061701052957 0.0653680567796 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 5.30420353982 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 7.22455752212 14% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 10.0 3.66592920354 273% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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