Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
It is hard to watch the late night news without being updated on the most recent scandals. Hollywood and government alike, individuals are constantly being exposed to the public for despicable actions. It is hard to imagine such horrible actions can have any positives but scandals bring attention to individuals’ true nature and provide prime examples of the advantages they take.
Scandals allow the general public to see hidden aspects of popular individuals. Everything from political to celebrity scandals, provides insight to hidden aspects that even the victim tries to disassemble. Especially in politics, this is allows transparency in people who we plan to elect for the purpose of making decisions affecting our lives. Just like the watergate scandal resulted in the resignation of president Nixon, scandals bring attention and action to those involved.
Not only is attention brought to the individuals involved in scandals, but the various laws and loopholes that allowed them to occur. All this attention focuses efforts to prevent it from happening again. New laws and reforms inhibits or dissuades others to follow. With loopholes being filled in, society can drive along a little smoother and easier.
However, scandals are not always productive especially when false. Used often in politics, fake accusations towards opponents can often gravitate focus away from important issues. Accusations made towards Barack Obama during his campaign for president took both the media’s and the public's attention. Many individuals --- without knowing his stance of important issues--- rose against him, questioning him based on false accusations.
Scandals are often a great way of exposing depraved individuals and brings political or society loopholes to light.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...tages they take. Scandals allow the general public to see hidden aspects of popular indivi...
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Line 7, column 69, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put before the verb 'Used'.
Suggestion: Often Used
...lways productive especially when false. Used often in politics, fake accusations towards o...
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Line 7, column 289, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...dent took both the media's and the publics attention. Many individuals --- without...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.264705882353 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.179738562092 0.157235817809 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0849673202614 0.0880659088768 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0522875816993 0.0497285424764 105% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0359477124183 0.0444667217837 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0882352941176 0.12292977631 72% => OK
Participles: 0.0555555555556 0.0406280797675 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.84596832057 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0490196078431 0.030933414821 158% => OK
Particles: 0.00326797385621 0.0016655270985 196% => OK
Determiners: 0.0653594771242 0.0997080785238 66% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00980392156863 0.0249443105267 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0130718954248 0.0148568991511 88% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1791.0 2732.02544248 66% => OK
No of words: 271.0 452.878318584 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.60885608856 6.0361032391 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.58838876751 88% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.468634686347 0.366273622748 128% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.372693726937 0.280924506359 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.258302583026 0.200843997647 129% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.19557195572 0.132149295362 148% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84596832057 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 219.290929204 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649446494465 0.48968727796 133% => OK
Word variations: 75.4754084812 55.4138127331 136% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 16.9375 23.380412469 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0526909947 59.4972553346 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9375 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 23.380412469 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.1875 0.674092028746 28% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 54.2068726937 51.4728631049 105% => OK
Elegance: 1.5243902439 1.64882698954 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281137343588 0.391690518653 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0918105160316 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0734322173255 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.550216062171 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.160546665196 0.149214159877 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103915100268 0.161403998019 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496363556651 0.0892212321368 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.229832363677 0.385218514788 60% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.122660849234 0.0692045440612 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16595316242 0.275328986314 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053509183646 0.0653680567796 82% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.30420353982 207% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 9.0 3.66592920354 246% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.