Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
In the world, people who want to start a business, find a place to live, be in a relationship, move to collage in a new place and even for electing a president in all these situations prefer to search and gather information as much as possible to choose the correct option. They might encounter with some scandals on the way of their research. What take attentions and make thoughts about is do the scandals are useful? And do people focus on problems rather than give another chance to others in order to make a new opportunity for compensate? I would like to answer to these assumptions through this essay with advantages and week points could exist.
It is considerable if a person wishes to buy a house from someone who had dealt with scandals through his life, appeared as unstable and reliable position. The customer might have lots of doubt to trust the owner and maybe scandal does not persuade the customer for signing the contraction. It means scandals can destroy not only people’s job but also their personal lives become under the pressure. Isolation, depression, fear of embrittlement and inability in society all push a person to be useless.
In addition, most scandals have not verifiable resources or it created by incorrect information without evidence in order to abolish well known people. To proof the scandals are mistaken and are not trustworthy take a lots of time and energy which can disturb a phenomenon chance for improvement.
On the other hand, in some situations scandals help people to open their eyes and take all concerns before making decision. But it should not obstacle the growth and investment for further attempt. For knowing a person, group or society having enough information are essential because it somehow makes people prepare for what they are going through however most data are from previous condition and for knowing better in present, need to take time and be patient will solve the problem. After working and concentration will be recognized most scandals were just mislead.
In conclusion, every day in human life scandals are forming for different reasons. Some for discouraging others power or fame. Sometimes scandals shaped because people committed impassable mistakes who become regret after everyone heard about their scandals. But the most important thing is scandals should not allowed human to make decisions and misjudged based on previous mistakes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...e attentions and make thoughts about is do the scandals are useful? And do people ...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...e mistaken and are not trustworthy take a lots of time and energy which can disturb a ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d for knowing better in present, need to take time and be patient will solve the ...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
... important thing is scandals should not allowed human to make decisions and misjudged b...
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Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d misjudged based on previous mistakes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 398.0 442.535393258 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09547738693 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71247884346 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56783919598 0.4932671777 115% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9183186837 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.736842105 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9473684211 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42105263158 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 5.13820224719 253% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148480398368 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469771737529 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431912619058 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804876882138 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369213680746 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 14.1392134831 93% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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