Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Scandals are basically the fact which shows cruelty, criticism, and many more things showed up in public or society. Scandal shows the illegal activities known or recorded with videos, audio recordings, photos in publically. In my opinion, Scandals are helpful to give attention to our society on issues which no reformer can raise.
There are many scandals which we listen in our daily life by newspapers or news channels. One of the most terrible scam in India is 2G spectrum scam in the last few years. A. Raja is a person that highlighted more, in the involvement of heavy corruption. In this scam, many political persons involved with him, they misused our position and gets loads of money, that is in many crores and this money saved in their wife’s account in abroad like mauratius, switzerland. Due to this, the government suffered heavy lose and filled the charges against the criminal conspiracy, bribed money and hence sent them to jail. On the contrast, these scams left the mark as a government employees. Apparently, creates exploitation, corruption, misuse their higher position and becomes dishonest people in the front of society.
India, usually many husbands and wives which are working, admits their child to preschools. On the basis of trust, they leave their kid in preschools. But some schools do not care and love their child, they become voilet and beat them so badly, many of them get hurt and have marks on their body, that you can also watch in news channels. Because of this happened, these parents take legal actions towards preschool and should not leave their children to these schools. Nevertheless, many times this news came up, still this problem is not fully solved yet.
If you flip the other side of the coin, these scandals are morally degraded the society. Many rumors come up in publically, sometimes the situation get worst and people become violent towards these scandals. In many cases, the government faces many other issues which create an abysmal situation in the country.
In the nutshell, Scandals are helpful that give attention to society about the problems that face our country but on the other hand, the society creates rumors, morally degraded, and sometimes people become violent. So in my point of view, scandals should come up to some extent.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, nevertheless, so, still, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 384.0 442.535393258 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.015625 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50415778389 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 215.323595506 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559895833333 0.4932671777 114% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0738005941 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 23.4991977007 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 5.13820224719 272% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147632604788 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461505278042 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468863922882 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895474064129 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398945153126 0.0667264976115 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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