Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
In todays’s world of contemporary media,everyone is aware of what is happening on a real time basis due to the advent of social media.For instance,an event which is happening live could be watched by people not only attending that event but throughout the world because of Facebook.In such an atmosphere,Scandals are really crucial as they bring out the real truth in a way that a speaker couldn’t due to a lot of factors ranging from the reach that the particular speaker might be having or his/her following,etc.Therefore,i agree that it is really necessary to bring the scandals out in the open through various sources such as a news channel,an application in a smart phone or Facebook.
First and foremost,in a corrupt country like india there a lot of scandals happening day in and day out regarding a lot of issues such as political,sexual,moral,literary and even artistic.For these scandals to be out in open,there should be an efficient machinery such a print media or news channels whose authenticity cannot be questioned or argued about.It is essential for the public to know how the powerful people in the society are manipulating laws and deceiving them for their personal gains.Scandals are an important part of the society as they bring out the truth in the open without an array of doubts that people have in their minds through rumours and word of mouth.The revelations not only target the particular individual of their misdeeds but it affects the whole society as the perpetrators are not brought to justice until the scandals are actually out.
Secondly,the rich and powerful people of the society think that they can get away with whatever they do with materialistic bribe given to the officials concerned which does work in a developing country like India.Such acts should be curbed and brought to an end about as soon as possible as it robs the general people of their fundamental rights which states that everyone is equal.Scandals play a big role here as speakers and reformers could target a few people or everyone wouldn’t be truly convinced by the particular speaker.Thus,scandals make sure that the government or the concerned machinery actually acknowledges the scam and work for the betterment rather than only highlighting it with no results.
In addition,there a lot of reforms that a particular society needs as there are a lot of evils such as rape,female foeticide,child marriage and so on which needs to be given their due diligence and act upon it for the betterment of the humanity as a whole.These horrific acts need to be dealt with in the most proactive manner and scandals one of the most effective ways that it could be brought about.Usually,the source of the scandals are not meeting the legal requirements or abuse of power or maybe a factor of lust and the list goes on.For ex,the 2g scam in india which was covered by the channel times now had the most influential and political people involved and it wouldn’t have been out in the open and the accused people wouldn’t have been brought to justice had it not been for media.As a matter of fact,it was the only way they could have been bought to justice as there was an uproar and angst among the public which caused the implementations which no speaker could have ever pulled of.
Finally,as there are a whole lot of benefits in exposing the misdeeds of the people whose wrongdoings affect the society,there are also a few downsides to it.For instance,the base of the scandals could be a rumour which could create a whole lot of confusion amongst the society through the same sources which intend to bring out the truth.This would make the consumer doubt every source of information reaching to him/her and that wouldn’t be ideal.Another flip side to it is that irrelevant issues could deviate the people’s attention from relevant topics which would again hamper the quality of information being provided to the general public.there is another problem nowadays which is affecting the genuineness of the scandals that some media houses are paid for by the corporate giants and politicians who manipulate the news being brought out to the world.
In conclusion,I would say that scandals are like a double edged sword which can have miraculous consequences or disastrous depending upon the intent of the individual bringing out the scandal and the information itself which could have a baseless root to begin with and could spiral into something which is not desirable at all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 42.0 19.5258426966 215% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 31.0 11.3162921348 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 33.0505617978 142% => OK
Preposition: 109.0 58.6224719101 186% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3775.0 2235.4752809 169% => OK
No of words: 750.0 442.535393258 169% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.23317569696 4.55969084622 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25678751055 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 330.0 215.323595506 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1161.9 704.065955056 165% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 125.0 23.0359550562 543% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 215.852315768 60.3974514979 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 629.166666667 118.986275619 529% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 125.0 23.4991977007 532% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.5 5.21951772744 623% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 7.80617977528 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214917317913 0.243740707755 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130471425387 0.0831039109588 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406090897157 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130471425387 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406090897157 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 64.8 14.1392134831 458% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -46.94 48.8420337079 -96% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.92365168539 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 50.9 12.1743820225 418% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.08 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 13.21 8.38706741573 158% => OK
difficult_words: 160.0 100.480337079 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 11.8971910112 496% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 52.0 11.2143820225 464% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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