"Scandals-whether in politics, academia, or other area-can be useful. They focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."
Everyday we follow news from many news paper, news channel and internet. only through social media we are aware of our activities happening around us because it is one of the major source which reaches to every door step. social media today has a powerful weapon to either uplift the matter or to left the controversy benighted. we may have seen many controversial matters where chaos was created because media gave the special importance to it and make it as highlight in front of everyone and suddenly it becomes the talk of the town. Somewhere down there are always some loop hole in every organizations which results in corruption and immoral acts.
If the matter of corruption was seldom discussed by some speaker where he/she would try to explain the adverse significance of it to us or if it was some one day news. we would probably ignore it because this is human nature that we tend to notice only those things which have already crossed the limit of our endurance .In today's time many scandals have occurred and this is one of the detrimental factor that we all humans are facing. our state of ignorance motivates those people who are behind deprave acts. Recent revelation of Edward Snowden about NSA leaked documents where tech giants Google ,apple and many other companies were able to look into our personal data. After this disclosure it created a state of tumult for the world. Nobody’s data was safe then. We would have not known about this if whistle blower Edward would have not taken stand. This shows humans will not worry about things unless some chaos is created.
Many political leaders, Social workers are working to bring out attention to matters of national importance and factors which could improve the existing situations, which will help our economy to flourish. They try to bring awareness about corruption, causes of venality. There are in fact many dedicated groups which take care to maintain order and peace in the political system such that no one tries to agitate it. However we are not concerned about what is going in the background, we notice only those things which are eye catching and so are scandals. Once such controversial matters like human trafficking , bribery comes into notice ,strong actions are taken because these are now known to public and if government does not takes action on this then government is answerable to people. However these political reforms or groups does not reveal the whole information to the people as according to them it can distress the harmony of the society. That is how many scams and wrongdoing are covered up and since they are obscure ,its uncertain that we would know the ramification of these immoral acts.
Conclusively it can be said that scandals definitely brings attention to major issues which would help government to improvise as pressure is usually developed by people to take some actions against it. It also help in coming up with the idea that is more effective and satisfying t obliterate the element that is menace to society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.232304900181 0.238963963785 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.185117967332 0.154291517835 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0852994555354 0.0886310499679 96% => OK
Adverbs: 0.049001814882 0.0506014161523 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0617059891107 0.0449626384858 137% => OK
Prepositions: 0.10889292196 0.123526278965 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0417422867514 0.0379742944744 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49527836244 2.82910677849 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0399274047187 0.0316879551592 126% => OK
Particles: 0.005444646098 0.0014075125626 387% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0834845735027 0.0950106342287 88% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.021778584392 0.0245489744465 89% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0290381125227 0.0157978311181 184% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3050.0 2899.98275862 105% => OK
No of words: 517.0 478.390804598 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89941972921 6.0591788892 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.65681771538 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338491295938 0.369966551584 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235976789168 0.285172536893 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147001934236 0.207245337619 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110251450677 0.136322040163 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49527836244 2.82910677849 88% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 234.298850575 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52417794971 0.492565540709 106% => OK
Word variations: 63.5103143802 56.8184620615 112% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 21.1264367816 104% => OK
Sentence length: 23.5 23.7468607788 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3131273609 62.0618507366 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.636363636 143.81877709 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.7468607788 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.728815259664 50% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.71264367816 298% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 47.0976789168 52.2641144681 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.29447852761 1.64547068916 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106828227194 0.39480681544 27% => More coherence wanted between essay topic and essay body.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0884081748087 0.11556216369 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0520337473024 0.0736162880345 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.44969465363 0.531340600358 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157973243889 0.15197228837 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391254373282 0.158818324754 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310843407784 0.0851127212816 37% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.395567002166 0.388921930462 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0240601879419 0.0677916285025 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804581679825 0.28015025965 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174702870179 0.0610219844235 29% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.8591954023 83% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.30459770115 170% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.96264367816 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.10632183908 74% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.93390804598 153% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.04597701149 98% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 15.0862068966 99% => OK
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Rates: 58.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.5 Out of 6