Society must instill competition and not cooperation in order to prepare their young people for leadership roles in industry, government and other fields
The best way a society can prepare its young people for their future leadership roles in various fields like government, industry and any other is by imbibing in them a sense of winning which comes from healthy competition. Cooperation may to some extent promote relationships and bring about a certain peace element while working in groups or teams but it is the feeling of competition that challenges a man or a women to realise their full potential. It is the ability of a leader to see the situation in all its objectivity and not accept that he is presented with.
Competition leads to never die attitude and a sense of fighting the odds to achieve the desried goals. Take for example the case of most honoured George Washington. He was being chased away by the british army to a point where the British Army thought the American general and his cause was over and gave up chanse pon them, it was the winning attitude of the General that didnt let his quit his cause. Despite heavy losses and a much smaller army he attacked them and kept the small sqirmishes alive until the much needed foreign help came and help the country achieve freedom. I somehow do not see cooperation making him go on in the said situation.
One may argue in the support of the claim, citing examples that i'ts cooperation that makes teams work in harmony and not competition. which is agreeable to an extent however in absence of competition, cooperation will only lead to yes-sir individuals, none of whom will be able to stand upto authority or status-quo, this will lead to stagnation and develpment will be impossible. Let me elaborate upon this by an example of a marketing department of a company where a brainstorming session is in action to design an advertising campaing for a product X. If in the session one member suggests an idea and others agree to it without any hesitaion as a sign of their cooperation. Imagine this situation vis-a-vis another situation where the same group is given the responsibility along with a prize of $25000 if the ad campaign is successful. Undoubtedly the second sitaution has chances of producing better campaign than the first one.
I would like to draw another example from the field of sports, where competition is at its highest form. Are the players not challeneged to achieve their best form and consequnetly a win if they are competing instead of just cooperating in the game. Is life not very similar to the sports arena and its amny dynamics. If the children are not taught to keep score of their goals from childhoood to instill a sense of competition, would it be possible for them to turn out to be a fine sportsman when they grow up. It is the competition that helps them to keep score of their wins and not cooperation. Having said that in no way I am saying that cooperation is not important on the field of sports.
To recapitulate, I would reiterate that to produce examplary leaders in variuos fields society must prepare its young people to compete fairly. Having said that when it comes to wokring in groups or leading a group leaders will also need to [ractice cooperation in multiple circumstances. Therefore, he/she must learn the importance of cooperation along with competition and fair play in their dealings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 33.0505617978 163% => OK
Preposition: 85.0 58.6224719101 145% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2729.0 2235.4752809 122% => OK
No of words: 568.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80457746479 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78318231951 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 292.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 850.5 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6177297983 60.3974514979 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.652173913 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6956521739 23.4991977007 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.65217391304 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245609347882 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632793173855 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072586174277 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143759295662 0.150359130593 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892885886893 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 100.480337079 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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