Some people believe that college students should consider only their own talents and interests when choosing a field of study. Others believe that college students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
There's a saying that goes "do what you love and you will never work a day in your life." Many students are entering college as undeclared, exploring what they love and which field might make them the happiest. Universities acknowledge this phenomenal and offer many electives. In fact, many schools within the university,such as the arts and sciences/humanities, will require that you obtain a certain amount of credits in free electives unrelated to your major. From the beginning, going back as far as elementary school, students are encouraged to choose a field of study based on their talents and interests. It may be argued that if you choose what you love, you cannot go wrong and will never doubt it.
However, this view fails to take into account one very important factor: the economy. Recent studies have shown that 40% of recent college graduates in the United States are unemployed. What might explain this occurrence? Well, many students, driven by pure passion and sanguinity, go into fields without looking at how the status of the economy affects the job market within their particular field. Millennials face the dismal situation of being stuck in an economic crisis. There are more students competing for the same job than ever before and the job market is having a hard time keeping up with the pace. It could take several weeks to months for a college graduate to finally land a career in their desired field. Others who also have a hard time finding a career in their field, but who refuse to be unemployed after college, often settle for mediocre jobs. They resort to bartending or waitressing, rather than becoming a performer in their dream play or journalist for a top newspaper.
Now, someone might argue that you should always pursue your passion and "where there is a will, there is a way," so to speak. Those who believe you should pursue your talents and interests over the availability of jobs in the field are living in a fairytale. I say this because one might have to wait years to find the perfect career of their dream. And in years, the state of our economy could get worse. Things are not as black and white as they seem, and many factors go into what affects the future of the economy. In keeping in mind the availability of jobs, one ensures that they will graduate and make a good living for themselves, putting their foot in the door and starting a great life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'in fact', 'such as', 'so to speak']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21218487395 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.172268907563 0.157235817809 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0693277310924 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357142857143 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.063025210084 0.0444667217837 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.121848739496 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0525210084034 0.0406280797675 129% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60179761395 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0210084033613 0.030933414821 68% => OK
Particles: 0.00210084033613 0.0016655270985 126% => OK
Determiners: 0.0903361344538 0.0997080785238 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.031512605042 0.0249443105267 126% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0231092436975 0.0148568991511 156% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2425.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 419.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.78758949881 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329355608592 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214797136038 0.280924506359 76% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.128878281623 0.200843997647 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0930787589499 0.132149295362 70% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60179761395 2.79330140395 93% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 219.290929204 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556085918854 0.48968727796 114% => OK
Word variations: 65.0954290224 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.95 23.380412469 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0498642778 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.25 141.124799967 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 23.380412469 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.94800884956 61% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 42.4297136038 51.4728631049 82% => OK
Elegance: 1.42635658915 1.64882698954 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362879222464 0.391690518653 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0726169526841 0.123202303941 59% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0592530764948 0.077325440228 77% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.429953013187 0.547984918172 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.137105984453 0.149214159877 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120462356052 0.161403998019 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814044003132 0.0892212321368 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.361478908719 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.100161012211 0.0692045440612 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268917140324 0.275328986314 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326890215343 0.0653680567796 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.