Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within law, is to make as much money as possible.
Corporations, fundamentally exist so as to bring in profits. I agree, money matters. But it is equally important that corporations take responsibility for the well-being of societies and the environments they operate in. Some corporations do take this responsibility seriously,while others are lacking in this area.
Profits brought in by the corporations contribute vastly to the country's economy and helps it to push forward to development. Corporations provide much more employment opportunities, places products in the global market, increases trade and taxation, thereby improving the economy of the country. Hence the first and major responsibility of corporations will be to seek out as large a profit as possible while operating within the law.
Additionally, corporations should also take responsibility for the well being of societies. Profits climb higher only when the consumers are satisfied. Recently, packaged noddles Maggie was put out of business when reports claimed it contained harmful ingredients. Sales could be resumed only after the company proved that their product was safe. The trust with the people serves as a factor for the survival of corporations.
Corporations also have a responsibility towards the environment. Corporate fails have lead to disasters like Bhopal gas tragedy in the past. Even the recent oil spills in Mexican Gulf is the result of lack of care on the part of corporations. These are incidents that affect marine and human lives and puts the reputation and stocks of these corporations in jeopardy.
To conclude, corporations should put in efforts to upgrade the welfare of the society and also consider the safety of the environment we live in, even while maximizing profits. The aspiration to attain high profits should not put the well-being of the society at risk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 35, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
Corporations, fundamentally exist so as to bring in profits. I agree, money matter...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...ns do take this responsibility seriously,while others are lacking in this area. Pro...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...y improving the economy of the country. Hence the first and major responsibility of c...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'hence', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as to']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.284345047923 0.240241500013 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.159744408946 0.157235817809 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0415335463259 0.0880659088768 47% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0607028753994 0.0497285424764 122% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0223642172524 0.0444667217837 50% => OK
Prepositions: 0.140575079872 0.12292977631 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0319488817891 0.0406280797675 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23145641367 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0287539936102 0.030933414821 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00319488817891 0.0016655270985 192% => OK
Determiners: 0.115015974441 0.0997080785238 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0159744408946 0.0249443105267 64% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00958466453674 0.0148568991511 65% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1826.0 2732.02544248 67% => OK
No of words: 284.0 452.878318584 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.42957746479 6.0361032391 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.397887323944 0.366273622748 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30985915493 0.280924506359 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211267605634 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172535211268 0.132149295362 131% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23145641367 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.48968727796 124% => OK
Word variations: 66.4179490494 55.4138127331 120% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6194690265 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7777777778 23.380412469 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.632528033 59.4972553346 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 141.124799967 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 23.380412469 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.444444444444 0.674092028746 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 46.7636932707 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.88157894737 1.64882698954 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.58139047741 0.391690518653 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0928976420528 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0790042359968 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.546231424723 0.547984918172 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170822599109 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.21630499492 0.161403998019 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118777344561 0.0892212321368 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.367691777264 0.385218514788 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0590336725402 0.0692045440612 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.381058061468 0.275328986314 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458753519727 0.0653680567796 70% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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