Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well- being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
From early age, we learn that “money makes the world round”. And indeed a corporate main goal is to allocate more financial gains into its system. Many bussines people wrongly reckon that their actions sole goal is to gain capital indifferently to any other constrain or parameter. It is vital to understand that companies have other responsability than only gain capital.
First, let’s assume that the permise is true and a comapny job is to make more money and nothing else. Let us assume this company is causing earth live great risk and actual hazzards. One would agree that the benefits of such a firm are diminished by the firms mal doings. Moreover, it is a fact that many companies in the current bussines world are accuring damage on the whole to society. One example is the enslavement of children in remote countries in order to provide cheaper products in another country. This exploitment is making comapny to profit more by cutting their costs, but it also causes poor children to live like slave and it is a merciless way to run a business. In the future, with the forming of globalization there will be more awareness for these kind of issue and a more global view of what is beneficial to the society as a whole, so these kind of exploitive acts can be prevented.
Histroically, the power of economical traders and manufactures replaced the power of kingdoms and barrons, and doing so it provided more freedom on average for all the world inhabitants. Yet, this is a process that is still far from perfect and should be on a continual search for improvement in order to establish a better framework. If companies are activly causing harms to people and the environment, maybe less so than kings and kingdoms, but still more than required; we than should absolutly do anything within our capabilities to stop malevolent acts by firms and secure the benefit of the average joe around the world as asertivily as possible.
Another important aspect of well management is responsibility. Warren Buffet the oracal from Omaha, once noted that “ it is unwise to give what you have in order to make more of what you do not need.” When corporates act without any sense of acountability they induce great risk. When firms act without accounting for that key parmater, they are more prone to fail bussines-wise. But in addition, over the exccesive risk they are taking they are also causing an clear possibilty to fail their clients and induce terrible consequences for the company and the people that make it.
Finally, there is the issue of long term versus short term. In taking the steps of maximizing gains many time the comapany’s manager ignores the long term harsh implications of such undue actions. Which yet cause another circle of misconducts and under-accountability for a firm which should reduce risk and provide advancement without exploiting.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...possible. Another important aspect of well management is responsibility. Warre...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...make more of what you do not need.' When corporates act without any sense of...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in addition', 'kind of', 'on the whole']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244485294118 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.154411764706 0.157235817809 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101102941176 0.0880659088768 115% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0496323529412 0.0497285424764 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0404411764706 0.0444667217837 91% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121323529412 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0275735294118 0.0406280797675 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85876373033 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0330882352941 0.030933414821 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0900735294118 0.0997080785238 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0110294117647 0.0249443105267 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0147058823529 0.0148568991511 99% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2905.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 488.0 452.878318584 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95286885246 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.327868852459 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.247950819672 0.280924506359 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165983606557 0.200843997647 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127049180328 0.132149295362 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85876373033 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 219.290929204 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536885245902 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 64.6563829586 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.2380952381 23.380412469 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8502002547 59.4972553346 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 141.124799967 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2380952381 23.380412469 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.674092028746 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 48.0331772053 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.60902255639 1.64882698954 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463777096185 0.391690518653 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112508532936 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0836858827335 0.077325440228 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50819479873 0.547984918172 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140835364434 0.149214159877 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165394802302 0.161403998019 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697328854122 0.0892212321368 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324918404943 0.385218514788 84% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0926250455567 0.0692045440612 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.292875309373 0.275328986314 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614209900275 0.0653680567796 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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