As industrialization and globalization of economy are happening at a rapid pace, the responsibilities of corporations towards the societies and environment are also becoming a significant factor. As some may believe that making as much profit as possible should be the only agenda for the corporations, however, may not work in favor of the organizations as they have more important responsibilities to handle.
Firstly, businesses play a big role in the development and the well-being of the societies. Because businesses help create more jobs for the locals and also bring people to the town from all over the world who also contribute to the local economy and market. For example, big companies like Wall-Mart buy fresh vegetables and fruits from local farmers which gives a good deal to them as Wall-Mart like companies are potentially regular customers to them. Thus, the corporations thinking to start their business in a new area should not just think about making the profit but to make an equal contribution to the lives of locals.
Secondly, how corporations maintain the environmental standards also matters. To illustrate this, we can consider global warming which is a major issue for every country on this planet. If industries and factories do not limit their carbon emission, it will make the case of global warming worse. Hence, corporations should introduce policies such as the use of clean energy to avoid environmental problems.
Although the organizations may need to implement strict regulations to keep the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate, and it may slightly affect their profit, it is truly beneficial in the long run.
In summary, corporations play a very important part in the development of our society and should definitely contribute to the local economy as it will produce much better outcome than just focusing on generating a pile of money.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...focusing on generating a pile of money.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 58.6224719101 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 308.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24025974026 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14223322132 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574675324675 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4022991598 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.5 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.21951772744 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233421934564 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732618235065 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765738746306 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126438518885 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104040455966 0.0667264976115 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 14.1392134831 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 48.8420337079 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.8971910112 134% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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