Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate. Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations, provided they operate within the law, is to make as much money as possible.
We say that every individual, as a member of a society has responsibilities towards the welfare of the society. Corporations constitute amalgamation of these individuals working together to achieve a common goal. Undoubtedly, corporations are instigated with the intent of making money. But, as they form an active part of the society, they are also expected to demonstrate responsible behavior towards the society and environment in which they operate.
There is the investment of lots of financial, material and human resources in the establishment of any corporations. Hence, it is understandable that these corporations are primarily driven by monetary gain. If not for the lucrative financial aspects of the corporations, no one would bother investing in them. So, as long as these corporations are operating within the law, they are free to make as much money as possible. However, as these corporations are part of a social setting, I believe they should take active participation in the environmental and social welfare. Also, due to their large reserve of resources, they are in an appropriate position to do so. For example, in my country, banks and private business ventures are constantly involved in various social projects-- plantation by the street side, renovation and maintenance of cultural heritage sites, construction of traffic stations and bus-stands, cleanliness campaign of the major rivers flowing through the city and such. Furthermore, after the devastating earthquake of 2015, these corporations showed active participation in the programs aimed at providing relief to the quake victims. They collected large sums of donations by their independent efforts and conducted rehabilitation programs in the quake affected areas. Such involvement in social activities serves as a means to reflect the corporations' conscious effort to serve and promote well-being of the society.
Nonetheless, the corporations in a way also benefit from such acts of social welfare. People are bound to take notice of their efforts, and hence a positive image of the corporations is set up among the public which helps to boost business. A socially active corporation is usually valued by people than the one which is reclusive. A bank which gives donations to build school for the needy, appeals to peoples' heartstrings and prompts them to take their business with that bank. This is intensified by the sentiments of people, that they are contributing in some way to the cause by being associated with the bank.
To recapitulate, I concord with the first section of the statement that corporations indeed have a responsibility to promote the well-being of the societies and environments in which they operate, not to put up a mere show of participation but a genuine display of their conscience.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: people
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'well', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.249488752556 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.141104294479 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.081799591002 0.0880659088768 93% => OK
Adverbs: 0.038854805726 0.0497285424764 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0429447852761 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147239263804 0.12292977631 120% => OK
Participles: 0.040899795501 0.0406280797675 101% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.25318283258 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347648261759 0.030933414821 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0040899795501 0.0016655270985 246% => OK
Determiners: 0.114519427403 0.0997080785238 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0040899795501 0.0249443105267 16% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0102249488753 0.0148568991511 69% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2809.0 2732.02544248 103% => OK
No of words: 442.0 452.878318584 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35520361991 6.0361032391 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391402714932 0.366273622748 107% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31221719457 0.280924506359 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.246606334842 0.200843997647 123% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.174208144796 0.132149295362 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25318283258 2.79330140395 116% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542986425339 0.48968727796 111% => OK
Word variations: 63.7566554591 55.4138127331 115% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.1 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2064908189 59.4972553346 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.45 141.124799967 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.55 0.674092028746 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 53.321719457 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.96330275229 1.64882698954 119% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.645763737598 0.391690518653 165% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.097042122857 0.123202303941 79% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0684446756988 0.077325440228 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.529157983493 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169812098587 0.149214159877 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.248661676918 0.161403998019 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107152487593 0.0892212321368 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.512825552211 0.385218514788 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0398939975565 0.0692045440612 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.481639138344 0.275328986314 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0632060158365 0.0653680567796 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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