Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
A famous quote by John Ruskin is 'Fine art is that in which the hand, the head and the heart of man go together." Art is the mean of self fulfillment. The mean by which culture and history passed from one generation to other is art. Today we know how our ancestors use to spend their life, their way of living, eating, and working, because art played a major role by passing this information to today's generation by numerous means such as painting, poetry, scriptures, and architecture. For many people art is a purpose of life, they express themselves by art and feel contended. Government should fund art, so that more people can opt it as profession and art can flourish.
Paintings are one example of art. Many famous paintings made by people in history are available. For example The Mona Lisa, Starry Night, The Dog plays poker, and The girl with pearl earring etc. From all these ancient paintings, now days we can guess lifestyle of people at that time.
Another mean of art is architecture. People move from one country to another or some civilizations eradicated by wars or natural disasters, but some architecture made by them survive and people in modern day world study those architecture to learn more about people in history. For example Ajanta Elora, a very famous architecture of India. It was made by some king who use to love art. Now days archeologist estimate from that people at time were civilized. All this happens because art was buttressed by emperors of that time.
Till today we enjoy poetry, plays and writings of The William Shakespeare. Some of his plays such as Hemlet, Othello, A midsummer Night's dream, and King Lear, are famous worldwide. All these writings were created between 1500 to 1600, but preserved from generations. These writings were of self fulfillment for Shakespeare. But if he would not have been able to earn his living through his art then it might not have been possible for him to create such a master piece.
Art is not highly paid profession for everyone, due to which many people need to leave art and do something else to earn their living and they can't devote all the attention to art. Which can prevent to develop any master piece. But if art is supported by government, it can grow like any other profession like engineering and people who are hesitant to opt it as full-time profession will not have to worry and they can do what satisfies their soul. As explained in above examples, art represents a civilization and culture, if government will support art then our future generation will get chance to know more about us. Therefore, government need to work on funding art and help to make it available to all people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
A famous quote by John Ruskin is apos;Fine art is that in which the hand,...
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... head and the heart of man go together. apos; Art is the mean of self fulfillment. T...
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Suggestion: used
...is art. Today we know how our ancestors use to spend their life, their way of livin...
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Message: Did you mean 'this architecture' or 'those architectures'?
Suggestion: this architecture; those architectures
...ve and people in modern day world study those architecture to learn more about people in history. ...
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... of India. It was made by some king who use to love art. Now days archeologist esti...
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...e by some king who use to love art. Now days archeologist estimate from that people ...
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...apos;t devote all the attention to art. Which can prevent to develop any master piece...
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Suggestion: fulltime
...nd people who are hesitant to opt it as full time profession will not have to worry and t...
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...nd people who are hesitant to opt it as full time profession will not have to worry ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 33.0505617978 112% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 473.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76109936575 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60915531315 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490486257928 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0771732909 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6153846154 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1923076923 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341160084835 0.243740707755 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103613684334 0.0831039109588 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965260066676 0.0758088955206 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184940735737 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111342322418 0.0667264976115 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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