Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should
address both of the views presented.
In democratic countries, people have the right to elect their government. Government officials are recruited to serve the people of the Nation.They have to carry out the task can bring long term benefit to community.It is debate on government official and their ability. I point out both prons and cons of the topic.
Firstly, I agree with second statement suggest that, official should base their decision on their own judgement. Individual one who aspires for to become a government official have pass through several test and examination. Such people are already accustomed to handling a situation or problem where they are put on the spot to make difficult decision.If some one wants government official he may pass all the critical criteria. This process for selection of governmental official, so that anyone working in such powerful position is in good shape.
people with qualified information, are more emotional while taking any decision with considering prons and cons. During an recent escalation of tension between India and Pakistan over the behading of Indian Soldiers public opinion was strongly favor in war. Taking hasty decision would lead definitely harmful to both nation. Government official would follow certain protocol, they call meeting of their spokesperson and sort out issue.
In considering first statement people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they surve. Government official are elected by people, they are nothing but smart people, while electing they take overall view of the person. Government official would consider will of people. some times judgement may go in wrong way, this decision hamper people.The best example of pandemic, because of spread of disease government abruptly put decision of lockdown, which hamper migrant and citizen in economical, social, physical way.
Nonetheless, it can't be denied the self-appraisal before making decision its for the purpose of nation, since many of requirement by the denizen are not well suited or vague, it is certainly the responsibility of government people to assess them first.
In conclusion, government official have certain ability while taking any decision because of their previous experience, knowledge. They can take decision on judgement while on other hand one can't regret will of people will concluding to decision, it affects on people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: They
...uited to serve the people of the Nation.They have to carry out the task can bring lo...
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Suggestion: It
...an bring long term benefit to community.It is debate on government official and th...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun test seems to be countable; consider using: 'several tests'.
Suggestion: several tests
...a government official have pass through several test and examination. Such people are alread...
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Suggestion: If
... on the spot to make difficult decision.If some one wants government official he m...
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Line 3, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... on the spot to make difficult decision.If some one wants government official he m...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
... the spot to make difficult decision.If some one wants government official he may pass a...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... powerful position is in good shape. people with qualified information, are more em...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...with considering prons and cons. During an recent escalation of tension between In...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'favored'.
Suggestion: favored
...an Soldiers public opinion was strongly favor in war. Taking hasty decision would lea...
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Suggestion: Some
...official would consider will of people. some times judgement may go in wrong way, th...
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Line 7, column 310, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...ial would consider will of people. some times judgement may go in wrong way, this dec...
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Suggestion: The
... wrong way, this decision hamper people.The best example of pandemic, because of sp...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ocial, physical way. Nonetheless, it cant be denied the self-appraisal before mak...
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Message: Did you mean 'cants'?
Suggestion: cants
...ocial, physical way. Nonetheless, it cant be denied the self-appraisal before mak...
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Line 9, column 74, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e self-appraisal before making decision its for the purpose of nation, since many o...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...on on judgement while on other hand one cant regret will of people will concluding t...
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Line 11, column 224, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'conclude'
Suggestion: conclude
...and one cant regret will of people will concluding to decision, it affects on people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45822102426 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77986579246 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574123989218 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9443112814 60.3974514979 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411794777197 0.243740707755 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1259878805 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947562680383 0.0758088955206 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197823110444 0.150359130593 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676124847808 0.0667264976115 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.