Some people believe that government officials must carry out the will of the people they serve. Others believe that officials should base their decisions on their own judgment.
The word “Government” is too broad to be defined, still we can make it as the department or ruling authorities, who plays a role in managing the country each and every way. Each of the person own a different mindset and thought, as far as the thought for the government is concerned there might be various thoughts,too. It is just the same here coming to the issue, which sets two different mindsets for the government, one of which is that government officials are appointed for the people and therefore wishes of the people should be served at first place; where as the other argument makes it up as, after being given the authority the government officials should be taking the judgments by their own. I find that the officials should be taking the decisions on their own and not by the influence of the people they serve.
When the people itself gives an opportunity to serve any of the leader, they must have the patience to have the results. The reason behind selecting the government is that, there are some problems and issues for which one needs to lead the whole country as one. They must be given a chance to serve by their own mindset and in a way they think they can address the issues and requirements of the country. After being talking about the reason why they should take their decisions own, let’s back it with some strong examples.
Firstly, the great person as a human and a great leader, “Narendra Damodardas Modi”, the current prime minister of India. Starting his career as a mere social worker to reach this stage where he can serve the nation as whole, he has given a very firm and estonishing example what qualities a leader should have and more importantly how to make the decisions for the sake of the country without getting influenced. Before serving in the great seat as a prime minister, he has been the chief minister of Gujarat; the progress is unbelievable and up to the mark to make Gujarat one of the best state of the country to live in. Moreover,we can see his steps and progress as a prime minister in ample of ways.
Secondly, making an odd possible and winning the USA elections by a huge margin, ”Barack Obama”, the current president of USA, is serving since last ten years. What he has done is just a brave step, the covert operation to kill the most dangerous terrorist “Osama Bin Laden”, also he has taken many steps for the betterment of the USA. What makes him outstanding and different among all is the fact that he won the elections again and won the trust of the USA citizens in every possible way.
In conclusion, every leader should be taking the decisions own and not by the influence of the people he serves because at the end he is the one people has given a chance to make the country by his thought process. But he must be willing to do the betterment of the people and country as a whole.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , too
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Suggestion: whereas
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'talking about']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219015280136 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.152801358234 0.157235817809 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0679117147708 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0356536502547 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0543293718166 0.0444667217837 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.106960950764 0.12292977631 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0475382003396 0.0406280797675 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.67774974752 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0237691001698 0.030933414821 77% => OK
Particles: 0.00169779286927 0.0016655270985 102% => OK
Determiners: 0.146010186757 0.0997080785238 146% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0237691001698 0.0249443105267 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0203735144312 0.0148568991511 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2898.0 2732.02544248 106% => OK
No of words: 517.0 452.878318584 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60541586074 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.294003868472 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.201160541586 0.280924506359 72% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.148936170213 0.200843997647 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1083172147 0.132149295362 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67774974752 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 219.290929204 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462282398453 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.6583868855 55.4138127331 97% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 30.4117647059 23.380412469 130% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.1805843368 59.4972553346 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.470588235 141.124799967 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4117647059 23.380412469 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.764705882353 0.674092028746 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 50.5278188645 51.4728631049 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.53846153846 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346387969717 0.391690518653 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.19255906984 0.123202303941 156% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0931953758715 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.681634112746 0.547984918172 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131033803782 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177890884202 0.161403998019 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107491473763 0.0892212321368 120% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.511986507443 0.385218514788 133% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0687190920207 0.0692045440612 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255408764535 0.275328986314 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897168578891 0.0653680567796 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.