Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realize.
What is the function of scientific discoveries? Some people believe that they give us a much better understanding of world around us, while others suppose it reveals an infinitely more complex world to us. The two sides both stand to some ground, since scientific discoveries are something so amazing that one or two simple sentences could not elucidate its meanings.
On one hand, scientific discoveries indeed expand our horizons and render us a more clear view of the society we live in. When Newton found the cause of the downward direction of almost every movement called “gravity”, he gave a beacon of hope to those who were still in the darkness of ignorance, opening a window of the rationality. Hundreds of years later, Einstein found that the principle does not correspond to objects which move in extraordinary high speed, his theory of relativity again update our realization of the world, unfettering us from the constraint of traditional physical theory. Nowadays, people have just discovered the “gravitational wave” which Einstein predicted a hundred years ago. Certainly, this great breakthrough in science pushes human’s recognization of the natural world to an even further space. If new discoveries continue to happen, then we will finally peel off the veil on the mysteries nature and get closer to the truth of the world.
On the other, with more discoveries updating our knowledge of present life, the world began to take on a more complicated appearance than we ever thought. In ancient times,when came to the origin of the world and human-beings, people just believed in the tale of the God, who created the world in seven days, and the story of Adam in Eden. However, as the science developed, Darwin raised the evolution theory which cast doubt on the justification of the legends. Although it seemed a shame to reduce people to the relatives of monkeys, people gradually accepted his theory. The process of evolution is much more complex than the former tale, and the details and expansion of the theory are still being studied by many biological scientists. By numerous experiments and hypothesis, modern people come to realize the similarities between human and many other species , which render us a deeper understanding of ourselves, while at the same time display a more complex, even abstruse world.
It is difficult to make a distinct description of what scientific discoveries have brought to us, are they clearing the mist of the world, or they just add up to the mysteries? For different people, answers may vary. For us common people who do not devote into the field of scientific area, we may be likely to hold that these discoveries make us more clear about the world we live in, since we have been enlightened by those great discoveries in centuries.However, for those scientists, especially who work in the frontier of advanced subjects,such discoveries may bring about many other questions which demand deeper explorations. For example, a scientist who discoveries a lifeless planet similar to earth would not stop at the point, instead he may continue to find the possible explanations for its lack of life .The discrepancies occur by virtue of a scientific inquiry spirit, which contributes to the ceaseless development of science.
In sum, almost all scientific discoveries work from two sides, one is to clear away the prejudice or false preconception entrenched in our minds, the other is to show the truthfulness of the natural world, which is far more complicated than we have ever thought.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: mysteries'; mystery's
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Suggestion: However
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'while', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.229483282675 0.238963963785 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.130699088146 0.154291517835 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0896656534954 0.0886310499679 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0623100303951 0.0506014161523 123% => OK
Pronouns: 0.048632218845 0.0449626384858 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12462006079 0.123526278965 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0212765957447 0.0379742944744 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.03645274817 2.82910677849 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031914893617 0.0316879551592 101% => OK
Particles: 0.00455927051672 0.0014075125626 324% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.11094224924 0.0950106342287 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0106382978723 0.0245489744465 43% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0243161094225 0.0157978311181 154% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3574.0 2899.98275862 123% => OK
No of words: 585.0 478.390804598 122% => OK
Chars per words: 6.1094017094 6.0591788892 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9180050066 4.65681771538 106% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358974358974 0.369966551584 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264957264957 0.285172536893 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.2 0.207245337619 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.147008547009 0.136322040163 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03645274817 2.82910677849 107% => OK
Unique words: 308.0 234.298850575 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526495726496 0.492565540709 107% => OK
Word variations: 66.4188589855 56.8184620615 117% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 21.1264367816 95% => OK
Sentence length: 29.25 23.7468607788 123% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.0016666507 62.0618507366 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.7 143.81877709 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 23.7468607788 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.728815259664 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.87931034483 102% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.71264367816 91% => OK
Readability: 55.7457264957 52.2641144681 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.5534591195 1.64547068916 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.48070915992 0.39480681544 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105096016435 0.11556216369 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0630973132217 0.0736162880345 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587416072422 0.531340600358 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180011510005 0.15197228837 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195733581261 0.158818324754 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103192745222 0.0851127212816 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.470204797815 0.388921930462 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.136145112242 0.0677916285025 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.34877637691 0.28015025965 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967320390124 0.0610219844235 159% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.8591954023 83% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30459770115 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.96264367816 141% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.10632183908 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.93390804598 51% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.04597701149 197% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 15.0862068966 113% => OK
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 4.25 Out of 6