Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
The Scientific discoveries has always given us to think beyond the possibilities. Human are one of the smartest creature on earth and world has lot of complexity in it. Humans can solve them by the help of Science.
Scientific discoveries have undoubtedly provided us scope to understand the world in more better way. There are infinite of possibilities lie in the universe that can be solved with the help of scientific work. The possibility of life on Mars is one of the achievement of the Science, that has provided the gate of the future for human being. The project Rover of Nasa to discover the water and possibility of life on Mars is one of the biggest step taken by human till now. The curiosity aggrandized, when Elon Musk has started Space X project to get on to the Mars in next 10 years. This giant imagination seems unpragmatic, but the step taken has already provided important information about the new planet. It can be intricated at first but can be helpful for the humanity as the time passes.
The history has also been uncovered by the scientific results. The archaeologist has also showed us the way to ancient civilization like, Harappa and Mohenjodaro, that articulated about the human history and taught many of the unanswered questions. The results are still useful for world and implemented in present life. It was complicated at first but solved with the help of science itself. The discoveries can not be figured out without the help of science.
Moreover, Medical field has also seen drastic change as the revolutionary waves of science, that has changed the mode of thinking of human being. For an example; Malaria was considered as dangerous illness one can face, resulting death in most of the cases. At present, The world has cure of even more devilize diseases; Cancer. The discoveries in medical science has given human to think beyond the ability of one person. It can not be possible without science.
There can be counterfeit of the argument with various projects of science which have provided more convoluted results than ever. From the unsolved theory of blackholes to the proton project to discover the human species lifespan, there are various project that has left us unanswered but on the other hand, it has provided us more deeper knowledge of the field.
To sum up the point, Science discoveries are very convoluted and time consuming but their results has always ended up as advantageous and served the humanity as whole. One can never reach to the goal if he will not start, whether the path is complicated and tough, either he will gain the experience or will end up with the desired results. World is really complicated but the enigma of the complexity can be solved by the help of Science.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'have', 'haven'.
Suggestion: have; haven
The Scientific discoveries has always given us to think beyond the pos...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: better
...ded us scope to understand the world in more better way. There are infinite of possibilitie...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of the biggest step taken by human till now. The curiosity aggrandized, when Elo...
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Line 3, column 477, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... biggest step taken by human till now. The curiosity aggrandized, when Elon Musk h...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...aught many of the unanswered questions. The results are still useful for world and ...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'cured'.
Suggestion: cured
...of the cases. At present, The world has cure of even more devilize diseases; Cancer....
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Line 9, column 327, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'deeper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: deeper
...t on the other hand, it has provided us more deeper knowledge of the field. To sum up th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'to sum up', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.2265625 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.173828125 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.083984375 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04296875 0.0497285424764 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.029296875 0.0444667217837 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138671875 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.064453125 0.0406280797675 159% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.72425543945 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021484375 0.030933414821 69% => OK
Particles: 0.0078125 0.0016655270985 469% => OK
Determiners: 0.10546875 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.025390625 0.0249443105267 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.013671875 0.0148568991511 92% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2753.0 2732.02544248 101% => OK
No of words: 471.0 452.878318584 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84501061571 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.58838876751 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.32059447983 0.366273622748 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256900212314 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171974522293 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110403397028 0.132149295362 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72425543945 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 219.290929204 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456475583864 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.3216056497 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.84 23.380412469 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1097151399 59.4972553346 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.12 141.124799967 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.84 23.380412469 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 44.5300212314 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.74603174603 1.64882698954 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362072499373 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117230903986 0.123202303941 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0955044247276 0.077325440228 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571015507425 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.142273654743 0.149214159877 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15516499482 0.161403998019 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773134595832 0.0892212321368 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.509448869119 0.385218514788 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0978577027448 0.0692045440612 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268978912116 0.275328986314 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431594032218 0.0653680567796 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 23.0 13.5995575221 169% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.