Some people believe that scientific discoveries have given us a much better understanding of the world around us. Others believe that science has revealed to us that the world is infinitely more complex than we ever realized.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
The speaker claim two extreme statements about the Scientific discoveries. Scientific discoveries are those which are made for the benefit of the people and the betterment of the society, these discoveries definitely have given us much better understanding of the world around us rather than making the making the world more complex. The second line of the paragraph stating that the discoveries had made the world more complex is unconvincing, because it cannot be simply denied that few discoveries like telephone, email and computer have simplified and shrunk the world to its minimum. The statement stating that the discoveries had made the life much simpler could be substantiated with better examples in order to clearly understand the effect of the discoveries.
Scientific discoveries date to stone age of the world, where humans discovered fire and wheels. The after effect of these discoveries or the result of these discoveries is the the today's modern world we enjoy. It cannot be denied that the discovery of fire has revolutionized without which we would have still lived in the stone age. Apart from making the humans to think more about the utilization of the discovery, A discovery cannot be judged to made the world more complex. This discovery of fire has made the process from cooking a food to running the mountain trains by burning the coal much simpler. Further moving on to the discovery of molecules and atoms which serve as a base for any object and without which the existence of any object is impossible, has made us understand about many chemical reactions and the simple science behind plants making their own food to more complex reactions of nuclear fission and fusion.
As stated in the above paragraph the discoveries had not only led to the understanding of the world but had also paved the way to make the world much more simpler, For example the discovery of reason behind spoilage of most valuable food like milk and the effect of heat which can be exploited to extend its shelf life led to another famous discovery of pasteurization process, which utilizes heat energy to kill the spoilage micro organisms. Only this discovery has made the transport of perishable food from one place to other possible. From this example it can be proved that the discovery has made us understand about the food spoilage micro organisms and has allowed us to think about the ways to tackle this particular problem.
undoubtedly from the above facts, it is clear that the discoveries has revealed us infinite things about the world and has led to many more series of discoveries in order to make the life much more simpler rather than ambiguous. It can be said that the discoveries had made the human being to think in a complex manner, but only about its utilization and this thinking is to simplify the world around us. A brilliant example is the discovery of search engines, at the initial time of its discovery it only served the purpose of collecting and providing information to the end user, but in recent days there is an option for voice search which enables the user to just pose their questions to their mobile phones about anything, may it be a route to some place or even to text a person in their contact list saying that they will be late by five minutes. yes the discoveries had made the life of human beings very simpler that they need not even get up from their couch to buy their need from a shop as the e-shopping has made it possible.
All in all, apart from making the thinking slightly complex about the utilization of the discovery, the scientific discoveries has made the world simpler than making it more complex.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'making the'.
Suggestion: making the
...ding of the world around us rather than making the making the world more complex. The second line of...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...s or the result of these discoveries is the the todays modern world we enjoy. It cannot...
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Line 2, column 173, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...s or the result of these discoveries is the the todays modern world we enjoy. It cannot...
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Line 2, column 536, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
... fire has made the process from cooking a food to running the mountain trains by burni...
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Line 2, column 608, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...rains by burning the coal much simpler. Further moving on to the discovery of molecules...
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Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...so paved the way to make the world much more simpler, For example the discovery of reason be...
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Line 4, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Undoubtedly
...ys to tackle this particular problem. undoubtedly from the above facts, it is clear that ...
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Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'simpler' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: simpler
...coveries in order to make the life much more simpler rather than ambiguous. It can be said t...
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Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a complex manner" with adverb for "complex"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...eries had made the human being to think in a complex manner, but only about its utilization and thi...
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Line 4, column 855, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yes
...that they will be late by five minutes. yes the discoveries had made the life of hu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, still, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => OK
Preposition: 94.0 58.6224719101 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3036.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 629.0 442.535393258 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.826709062 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00798087137 4.55969084622 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61682123818 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.400635930048 0.4932671777 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 965.7 704.065955056 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.44834428 60.3974514979 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.666666667 118.986275619 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.9444444444 23.4991977007 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.21951772744 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313903508139 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124162124827 0.0831039109588 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100142056687 0.0758088955206 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209836713335 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747437696905 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 14.1392134831 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.