Sports stars & movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them. In return for the millions of dollars that they are paid, we should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibility.
The statement said that "Sports stars and movie stars have a responsibility to behave as role models of the young people. We have paid million dollars, so we can expect from them to fulfill their responsibility." Young people are inspired from soprt stars and movie stars. So i agree with assertion to the statement.
Sports stars and movie stars always become most popular in every country. People of the country think that they are very inspiring person. They become to this position by many efforts and also their wisdom. Sports stars and movie stars have an insatiable appetite for achieving their goal. They are working day and night for their respective goal. When they become the movie stars and sports stars, people will admire their effort and learn from them. Especially youth will attract to them fast and youth will try to be like them.
Every sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to be as role models for young people. This could help young people to think in right way and young people will make their future first by great effort. Sports stars and Movie stars say that "If you want to be something in your life, you should have to work hard in your life." They are saying because they have gone through this situation. Hence, sport stars and movie stars are behaving as role models to inspire many young people.
Young people have lot of thoughts in their mind and they are trying to be successful. Sometimes, it did not happen what they want to be. After that they will become demotivated and try to find inspiring stories. There sports stars and movie stars story could help them to think positive in every situation. We are expecting that, our role model will fulfill our needs. We have to understand that they will alwyas inspire us, after that we have to do our work. Sport stars and movie stars obey their responsibility very carefully, so there is no need of questioning in this statement.
Sometimes, there are some movie stars and sports stars. They have some wrong values and principles. So young people should have to take care about this. They have to be more careful and never caught into that area. This is a dark side, which will never help to do their job in right way.
Eventually, sports stars and movie stars fulfill our societal responsibility. They always try to inspire many young people. This will help to our nation and the nation will start developing under our youth people. This is an obligation of sport stars and movie stars.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'so']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262295081967 0.240241500013 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.170081967213 0.157235817809 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0553278688525 0.0880659088768 63% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0430327868852 0.0497285424764 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0901639344262 0.0444667217837 203% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0860655737705 0.12292977631 70% => OK
Participles: 0.0225409836066 0.0406280797675 55% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.35675801962 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0450819672131 0.030933414821 146% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0553278688525 0.0997080785238 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.030737704918 0.0249443105267 123% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00614754098361 0.0148568991511 41% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2524.0 2732.02544248 92% => OK
No of words: 435.0 452.878318584 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80229885057 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.255172413793 0.366273622748 70% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.151724137931 0.280924506359 54% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0988505747126 0.200843997647 49% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0735632183908 0.132149295362 56% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35675801962 2.79330140395 84% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 219.290929204 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.406896551724 0.48968727796 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.0153917665 55.4138127331 79% => OK
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6194690265 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.5 23.380412469 62% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.849355812 59.4972553346 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1333333333 141.124799967 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 23.380412469 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.166666666667 0.674092028746 25% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 29.6724137931 51.4728631049 58% => OK
Elegance: 1.22297297297 1.64882698954 74% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533184726574 0.391690518653 136% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105366869798 0.123202303941 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0900523045201 0.077325440228 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.482762802109 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.129019781508 0.149214159877 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193629325246 0.161403998019 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957640966421 0.0892212321368 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.438737214945 0.385218514788 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0671183163508 0.0692045440612 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370370053147 0.275328986314 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782487847937 0.0653680567796 120% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.4325221239 201% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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