Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning."
Success is subjective, it means different for different people. And hence the way it can be achieved varies with your goal. For example, if creating huge amount of money is success for you; then you have to take risk. Because it is difficult to generate that kind of money without taking risk. By risk i mean calculated one.
On the other hand, If you follow different approach I.e. planning. Planning suites certain kind of goals; which takes perseverance. For example, if success is to achieve some objective; IAS officer or to serve your country; you need proper planning and then execute your plan step by step to achieve your goal. It cannot be done through risk taking.
There might be some situations where success might require both of the approach es. Sometimes you require both planning and leap of faith. For Example, consider a situation where an employee is stuck with a Job he doesn’t like. He wants to follow his passion say photography. But, he is not sure that he will make large money in that profession. Despite that, he knows he will be happy following his passion. For him this defines success. Having done all the planning, he still requires leaf of faith. Taking that might change his life.
So, through above situations I want to convey that approach for success depends upon how you define success; it is not hard coded. Sometimes two approach are mutually exclusive, while sometimes you need both.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ss for you; then you have to take risk. Because it is difficult to generate that kind o...
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Line 1, column 303, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...d of money without taking risk. By risk i mean calculated one. On the other ha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'while', 'for example', 'i mean', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.22027972028 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.185314685315 0.157235817809 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.048951048951 0.0880659088768 56% => OK
Adverbs: 0.041958041958 0.0497285424764 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0979020979021 0.0444667217837 220% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111888111888 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0384615384615 0.0406280797675 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46120756755 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0244755244755 0.030933414821 79% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0594405594406 0.0997080785238 60% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0244755244755 0.0249443105267 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174825174825 0.0148568991511 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1436.0 2732.02544248 53% => OK
No of words: 245.0 452.878318584 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8612244898 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.58838876751 86% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.330612244898 0.366273622748 90% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261224489796 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171428571429 0.200843997647 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0857142857143 0.132149295362 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46120756755 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 219.290929204 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.48968727796 121% => OK
Word variations: 60.4065589124 55.4138127331 109% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 11.6666666667 23.380412469 50% => Sentence lengths are too short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8873900124 59.4972553346 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.380952381 141.124799967 48% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.6666666667 23.380412469 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.52380952381 0.674092028746 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 37.7891156463 51.4728631049 73% => OK
Elegance: 1.13978494624 1.64882698954 69% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125651309256 0.391690518653 32% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0775050325947 0.123202303941 63% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0976330436637 0.077325440228 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.395282320237 0.547984918172 72% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.157132060161 0.149214159877 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047420098734 0.161403998019 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393814945052 0.0892212321368 44% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.219123666262 0.385218514788 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0894865311771 0.0692045440612 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780214329504 0.275328986314 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286997625313 0.0653680567796 44% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.5995575221 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.