The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
The assertion that the surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its scientists, rulers or artists but by the general welfare of its people is controversial. One cannot deny the fact that country's development or how country is viewed worldwide is measured by the condition in which the people are living in it but many times country is also known by its fearsome leaders, artists, scientists or many other personalities which make country proud at the international level.
I do assert up to some extent with the given statement but not completely. But looking deeper down the statement one can say that nation's pride also exist in the feats achieved by the artists, scientists, or sportspersons and many others. For instance a country is always remembered by its number of medals the country's sportspersons are able to win at the Olympics. A country is always remembered by it leading personalities like Gandhi from India made the nation proud by spreading his act of Ahimsa or Nonviolence worldwide and today many nations see him as an ideal of peace. No matter how good are the students in a class but the class is always remembered by the name of the topper. Similarly nation is always remembered by the achievements by its artists or other leading personalities.
However, only accomplishments of the persons of a country are not always that matters the most in order to view the nation as being a great. Nation's development is also scrutinized by the people's condition residing in the country no matter how big are the achievements of the people, they are of use if the people of that country are living in a poor conditions or unhealthy environment. Nation's growth is estimated by its people's welfare. Big achievements of the people are of no use until they help or serve their own countrymen. Scientists could help a lot by teaching the young students of the motherland for free, sportsperson could teach them the sports, doctors could provide free treatment, and businessman could provide help in terms of money like providing shelters and many more things.
Therefore, it would be an extreme statement to say that only general people's welfare is the surest indicator of a great nation. Its artists also contributes to the development of a nation and for a nation to be great, its people should work together in order to build a great nation.
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Suggestion: Similarly,
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'similarly', 'so', 'therefore', 'for instance']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268965517241 0.240241500013 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.147126436782 0.157235817809 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0781609195402 0.0880659088768 89% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048275862069 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0413793103448 0.0444667217837 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.137931034483 0.12292977631 112% => OK
Participles: 0.048275862069 0.0406280797675 119% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.93405600293 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Infinitives: 0.016091954023 0.030933414821 52% => OK
Particles: 0.00229885057471 0.0016655270985 138% => OK
Determiners: 0.12183908046 0.0997080785238 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0183908045977 0.0249443105267 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0114942528736 0.0148568991511 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2395.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 407.0 452.878318584 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88452088452 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356265356265 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262899262899 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.169533169533 0.200843997647 84% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127764127764 0.132149295362 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93405600293 2.79330140395 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439803439803 0.48968727796 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.8952581511 55.4138127331 85% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 27.1333333333 23.380412469 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.2416931019 59.4972553346 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.666666667 141.124799967 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1333333333 23.380412469 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 53.4232596233 51.4728631049 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.92233009709 1.64882698954 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.6962347442 0.391690518653 178% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.139036650742 0.123202303941 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0861485156411 0.077325440228 111% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.613821105406 0.547984918172 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.175847033761 0.149214159877 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.325139173576 0.161403998019 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175001162003 0.0892212321368 196% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.487936211566 0.385218514788 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.130833828153 0.0692045440612 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.518438172818 0.275328986314 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115943090703 0.0653680567796 177% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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