There is little justification for society to make extraordinary efforts—especially at a great cost in money and jobs—to save endangered animal or plant species.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Every living specious in this world have its own role to maintain the balance of the ecosystem. So it is necessary to save the endangered specious at all-cost. The advent of human civilization made us the superior creature but we lost the value of life for other specious. Thus, justification against cost or jobs should not be a barrier to rectify the things even we are not intended to do.
The main cause for the unbalance in the environment is the human civilization and the advancement of technologies. The moment we discovered the fire, we started pollution the environment. The new era had polluted almost everything such as air, water , land. And in this 21st century we are pollution the space also. The more we advance, the more we destroy the ecosystem either intentionally or non-intentionally. Thus in-order to regain the value of our environment, we should take every possible measures to maintain the sustainability of our surroundings. "Hotspots" are the regions which contain rich flora and fauna. These hotspots determines the resource of a forest. Now-a-days these regions found in minimum amounts due to the destructive action we made for us to develop. These are the vital regions which determine the annual rainfall, temperature changes and also vegetation. Thus it is necessary to uplift the population of endangered specious.
This is the world, we destroyed everything by misunderstanding the principle "survival of the fittest". As we are the only sixth sense specious, we think we are the only one specious who rules this earth. But the saddest part is we are destroying our self. Fifty years back animals like Tasmanian Tigers, One horn Rhino were found, but now only the fossils remains. And many plants and trees are destroyed for its medicinal, ascetic values. We lost most of the valuable plants and animals during this technological advancement, so-called transaction. Thus many laws should be framed by the government to prevent the killings from happening.
To make awareness among the public it is necessary to provide education about the surroundings and certain laws should be implemented and strictly followed by the government. And to improve the job factor for these sectors necessary incentives may be implemented.
In conclusion, We should act in every possible ways to save the endangered specious. Because its survival will be as important as ours and to maintain the biodiversity in an environment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...zation made us the superior creature but we lost the value of life for other spec...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
..., we started pollution the environment. The new era had polluted almost everything ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ted almost everything such as air, water , land. And in this 21st century we are p...
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Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...21st century we are pollution the space also. The more we advance, the more we destr...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...her intentionally or non intentionally. Thus in order to regain the value of our env...
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Message: You should probably use 'determine'.
Suggestion: determine
...in rich flora and fauna. These hotspots determines the resource of a forest. Now a days th...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...ts determines the resource of a forest. Now a days these regions found in minimum amounts ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...etermines the resource of a forest. Now a days these regions found in minimum amounts ...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...emperature changes and also vegetation. Thus it is necessary to uplift the populatio...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...cal advancement, so called transaction. Thus many laws should be framed by the gover...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide education about the surroundings and certain laws should be implemented and s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'thus', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.226373626374 0.240241500013 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.149450549451 0.157235817809 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0945054945055 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0483516483516 0.0497285424764 97% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0593406593407 0.0444667217837 133% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0835164835165 0.12292977631 68% => OK
Participles: 0.032967032967 0.0406280797675 81% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14249514053 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.032967032967 0.030933414821 107% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.134065934066 0.0997080785238 134% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0153846153846 0.0249443105267 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00659340659341 0.0148568991511 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2477.0 2732.02544248 91% => OK
No of words: 404.0 452.878318584 89% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13118811881 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34900990099 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.284653465347 0.280924506359 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.215346534653 0.200843997647 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158415841584 0.132149295362 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14249514053 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539603960396 0.48968727796 110% => OK
Word variations: 61.3337273935 55.4138127331 111% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5384615385 23.380412469 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9959052374 59.4972553346 47% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2692307692 141.124799967 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 23.380412469 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.307692307692 0.674092028746 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.21349557522 211% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 44.0038080731 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.64882698954 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320845175248 0.391690518653 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0896464731805 0.123202303941 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0735067332711 0.077325440228 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.528089278908 0.547984918172 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.139174607779 0.149214159877 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128375430701 0.161403998019 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624022989133 0.0892212321368 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.419903424859 0.385218514788 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.15627035758 0.0692045440612 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236549149528 0.275328986314 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054675030929 0.0653680567796 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.5995575221 81% => OK
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6