True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself.
A person will be known as successful when he achieve a goal set for him. The goal may be set by himself or by others. So, some may agree with the statement given above, I, however depart from the authors opinion.
Firstly, we cannot distinguish a person whether he is a true success or failure. If anyone achieve his/her goal then he/she will be a successful person. It doesn't matter whether the goal achieve by him was set by himself or from others. For instance, the achievement from the greatest scientist are from their own interest and they are known as successful person if they obtain the desire output. Though he had set goal for him himself and he would not be a successful person. We cannot judge a person by the goal set from himself. So, person will be said as successful if they achieve output from the task that are assigned to them.
Furthermore, the manager of the company is known as successful person, if his company gets a more optimized output than his competitor. So here we cannot said that the manager is successful just because of his effort. Though his leadership skill may be the one point for his company to be successful but it happened just because of onerous subordinates of his organization. Here goal achieve from each staff of the organization is helpful to make the manager successful.
Hence, for a person to be a successful they should achieve the goal set for them. They are known as successful person if they obtain the desire output from the task or if the result generated from them is very rare to find and is much helpful for others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
...son will be known as successful when he achieve a goal set for him. The goal may be set...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...given above, I, however depart from the authors opinion. Firstly, we cannot distinguis...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hether he is a true success or failure. If anyone achieve his/her goal then he/she...
^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'achieves'.
Suggestion: achieves
...is a true success or failure. If anyone achieve his/her goal then he/she will be a succ...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... he/she will be a successful person. It doesnt matter whether the goal achieve by him ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 585, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll be said as successful if they achieve output from the task that are assigned t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 283.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58657243816 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54277052226 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.420494699647 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7336273052 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.125 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 5.21951772744 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266310340716 0.243740707755 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124404646421 0.0831039109588 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875640883246 0.0758088955206 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192656246765 0.150359130593 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395004040144 0.0667264976115 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 48.8420337079 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 100.480337079 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.