To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Cities are the most diverse areas of the world with people belonging to numerous traditions, cultures, ethnicity, backgrounds etc. Cities are the main centers of trade and hence comprises of people from all various locations. Cities are always known for its diversity and large population. That is the reason why cities provide a very strong view of the characteristics of a society.
Cities comprise of people from various location and along with them, these people bring in their culture and tradition, as a result the cities develop into a model of the country or the state as a whole. For example, India consists of extremely diverse people, with completely different tradition, culture, foods, lifestyles, even festivals. Therefore it becomes difficult to survey every single region within that huge country where the population is about 1.5 billion, but the country’s capital, New Delhi acts as a model to depict the whole country. In New Delhi people from all the corners of the world are found. These people even celebrate their own festivals, keep to their own tradition and culture. New Delhi, hence can be studied to know the actual characteristics of India.
Cities, as consist of a large population, will be convenient to draw out a more reliable data. A study based on survey need more and more data and since cities are capable of providing a huge number of people belonging to various backgrounds, can be considered an ideal spot to take forward such study.
One may argue that city’s culture normally tends to change. Yes, culture tends to change as a measure to adaptability but the change in culture can rarely affect the characteristic of a society. Characteristics of a society are linked to the living style, beliefs that people follow, people’s likings, their nature etc.
In conclusion, societies are created by people and to study society one will have to study people from each and every culture, tradition and background. Therefore, I believe cities put forward a concise as well as the pragmatic model of the whole nation and to study about characteristics of a society cities can be considered best ideal location.
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...racteristics of a society cities can be considered best ideal location.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.287153652393 0.240241500013 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.128463476071 0.157235817809 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0831234256927 0.0880659088768 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0327455919395 0.0497285424764 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0201511335013 0.0444667217837 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11838790932 0.12292977631 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0277078085642 0.0406280797675 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80907928039 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0377833753149 0.030933414821 122% => OK
Particles: 0.00251889168766 0.0016655270985 151% => OK
Determiners: 0.108312342569 0.0997080785238 109% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0176322418136 0.0249443105267 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00503778337531 0.0148568991511 34% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2153.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 355.0 452.878318584 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06478873239 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.58838876751 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.394366197183 0.366273622748 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.264788732394 0.280924506359 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171830985915 0.200843997647 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123943661972 0.132149295362 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80907928039 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 219.290929204 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518309859155 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 55.3532837318 55.4138127331 100% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8823529412 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1175455221 59.4972553346 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.647058824 141.124799967 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8823529412 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.647058823529 0.674092028746 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.21349557522 96% => OK
Readability: 47.3612261806 51.4728631049 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.38888888889 1.64882698954 145% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359840877854 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117051628239 0.123202303941 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0818524203362 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.575887326869 0.547984918172 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.143619835387 0.149214159877 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149311067536 0.161403998019 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685865393349 0.0892212321368 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.277071095311 0.385218514788 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.10504731188 0.0692045440612 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246484363306 0.275328986314 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056914381702 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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