To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position
The statement holds true for the fact that to understand various culture and tradition of a country or society, one must study its major cities. The major cities gives a glimpse of cultural heritage of the society. It is quite evident that the major cities of the country or society hold a historical importance. When someone goes deep inside the history of major cities, it unveils the true stories and also the myths about the tradition, lifestyle and the culture.
For example: Major cities in Rajasthan, India, like Jaisalmer, Udaipur, etc. has so many historical tales as well as defined reasons about the culture and tradition being followed. The people staying in those cities have also inculcated such values in their daily chores. The infrastructures of such cities provide evident details of people who used to stay there. The food habits and the languages also give the information about the society. Festivals celebrated in such cities are also taken into consideration which has a key role in shaping of society. But it is not necessary that all the major cities are of history importance and gives characteristics of the society. There are cities having no importance and characteristics of society at all but are major due to the large geographical area that it occupies.
These cities have old as well as new settled parts. When one goes meandering then they are sure to find many astonishing things related to the place. From the establishment of the city to its destruction or inhabitation the city itself speaks the glory of its survival. The older the city the more stories buried inside it. Apart from historical importance the characteristic of society is also based on the business and work culture that it follows. Cities like New York are more of modern characteristic of society whereas Washington D.C holds historic as well political importance.
Major cities have varied culture and different societies. Society that is rational on basis of caste, color and sometimes economic status as well. Likewise there are societies that show no discrimination on basis of caste, gender, color or any other factor. The people who stay in those cities define the characteristics of their society. In a metropolitan cities which are also the major cities people have migrated in inhabited from various small town and distant areas which now form a society which gives plethora of culture and tradition that were not a part of those societies a decade back.
Major cities may or may not define and give information about the characteristics of the societies. If small towns and villages are to be considered they would give a genuine characteristic of the society which is still preserved by the people.
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...tails of people who used to stay there. The food habits and the languages also give...
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... have old as well as new settled parts. When one goes meandering then they are sure ...
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...and sometimes economic status as well. Likewise there are societies that show no discri...
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...ics of their society. In a metropolitan cities which are also the major cities people ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'likewise', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'whereas', 'apart from', 'for example', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268993839836 0.240241500013 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.141683778234 0.157235817809 90% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100616016427 0.0880659088768 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0533880903491 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0287474332649 0.0444667217837 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121149897331 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0390143737166 0.0406280797675 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82915534045 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0143737166324 0.030933414821 46% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112936344969 0.0997080785238 113% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0082135523614 0.0249443105267 33% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0246406570842 0.0148568991511 166% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2726.0 2732.02544248 100% => OK
No of words: 451.0 452.878318584 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.044345898 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.58838876751 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348115299335 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.259423503326 0.280924506359 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166297117517 0.200843997647 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121951219512 0.132149295362 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82915534045 2.79330140395 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 219.290929204 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.48968727796 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 50.3649745114 55.4138127331 91% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.04 23.380412469 77% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0035427077 59.4972553346 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.04 141.124799967 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.04 23.380412469 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.52 0.674092028746 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 43.9823503326 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.91743119266 1.64882698954 116% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.457464024765 0.391690518653 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126251413736 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.114758933905 0.077325440228 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522357605119 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162393129864 0.149214159877 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188763004081 0.161403998019 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0992990869889 0.0892212321368 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.440032746585 0.385218514788 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107463331436 0.0692045440612 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.336723695719 0.275328986314 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057588168857 0.0653680567796 88% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.4325221239 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 7.22455752212 180% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.70907079646 332% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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