To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Any major city is the epicenter of its culture and values in the world for which it is known. Each community comprises of its own practices, rituals, charecteristics, etc. In order to understand any of these characteristics one could definitely study these big cities but, also it is not completely true and appropriate. I am in partial disagreement with the above statement.
Cities such as New York, New Delhi, Milan, Madrid, etc, are the the nexus of their communities. They represent different cultures and attributes of the country they are situated in. Exploring them further gives us knowledge about the place, its history and its evolution, which relates and edifies us substantial characteristics of that place. For instance, Milan is a city reknown for “Fashion” in the world. Delving more into its culture and history makes it obstrusive of its feature.
However, people at distinct places have dissimilar traits and features who then combine to form a society. As these major cities had developed into global mecca, people of different countries reside in each of them. Thus, to only study a major city in order to understand the features of that community is not that much significant. All these major cities are approximately same in many aspects, say mordernization, infrastructure, lifestyle, etc. Due to these ubiquitous factors which could be observed in each of these cities, makes it difficult to study about its conventional culture and values.
For instance, New York is the city in the USA where the society consists of Chinese, Indians, Africans, Americans, Japanese, etc. The presence of people from plethora of communities from around the world in these cities clouds us and makes it abstruse to know more about the orthodox attributes of the society as they knowingly or unknowingly also infuse culture and characteristics of their homeland.Whereas, while studying the whole community offers us the exact traits of that community.
Finally to conclude I reiterate, that only major cities are not solely responsible for the characteristics prevailing in it, rather whole community and country defines the real essence and features of the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'whereas', 'while', 'for instance', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.12 0.157235817809 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.09 0.0880659088768 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0475 0.0497285424764 96% => OK
Pronouns: 0.065 0.0444667217837 146% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.1275 0.12292977631 104% => OK
Participles: 0.02 0.0406280797675 49% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 3.15645845072 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.02 0.030933414821 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0975 0.0997080785238 98% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.005 0.0249443105267 20% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0125 0.0148568991511 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2191.0 2732.02544248 80% => OK
No of words: 348.0 452.878318584 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29597701149 6.0361032391 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.58838876751 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.370689655172 0.366273622748 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.290229885057 0.280924506359 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.221264367816 0.200843997647 110% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.158045977011 0.132149295362 120% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15645845072 2.79330140395 113% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 219.290929204 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 54.8247569234 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4705882353 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.451235039 59.4972553346 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.882352941 141.124799967 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.674092028746 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.21349557522 134% => OK
Readability: 49.493576741 51.4728631049 96% => OK
Elegance: 1.66666666667 1.64882698954 101% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37389904603 0.391690518653 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0704849699127 0.123202303941 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0763857401308 0.077325440228 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.530649603228 0.547984918172 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188948833464 0.149214159877 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140781569039 0.161403998019 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680783918582 0.0892212321368 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.337448457233 0.385218514788 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0685864275652 0.0692045440612 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2560656093 0.275328986314 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324009569109 0.0653680567796 50% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.4325221239 29% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88274336283 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 7.22455752212 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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