To understand the most important characteristics of society, one must study its major cities.
The statement's primary goal is to research in society. It means it contains all kind of activities to study and try to characterise it. So, I agree with the assertion that to understand the characteristics of society, major cities can play important role in your research work. Research is the only thing that can improve our society efficiently (Its about understanding the characteristics of a society and nothing about improvement or efficiency has been mentioned).
One of the great reason (reasons) behind to study (studying) major cities is their population. Population growth is always high in cities. That means the more resource to study and the more resource can get accurate result. High population provides different kinds of society which related to different kinds of religion. Every religion has its own speciality and uniqueness. There are various numbers of societies in major cities which can be used as a base to understand characteristics.
Other reason behind to study major cities is high education. Education ratio is high compare to normal cities in major cities which indirectly effect the research. Educated people can easily communicate with researcher work. So, research work can more accurate and get speed to characterise it. For example, In India kerala (the state of Kerala) has high education ratio compare to other states thats why more different kinds of researcher work is done in it compare to other ones. Education ratio can be play an important role in research.
Major cities have one greater factor is their facilities. Facilities in major cities are always more compare to other cities which helps to improve the study. Due to different kind of facilities researcher work can be speed up. Major cities are always helpful in any kind of research which related to different purpose. For example, If I have to study on gujarati people related to India. So, First of all I choose Gujarat State to understand them quickly and than I choose to do research in Ahmedabad city in which I can full feel my any kind of requirements related to my research work. (The sentences are incomplete) Ahmedabad is one of the major city (cities) in Gujarat which has more than 50 million people. Due to this kind of population I get more resource. So, I will meet different kind of gujarati people and try to understand their culture.
I can get how they celebrate their festivals, how they enjoy their life, how they work together, how they faces the problems etc. These whole information I can get only from Ahmedabad. Result to this, I can get conclusion very quickly.
Research in major cities is not too difficult but there might be some obstacles which can interrupt the research. For example, To characterise society that means study the private life of people which can be aberrant (wrong usage) for them. People can deny to communicate with us because of their privacy.I t can impact major on research. But there is also a positive side that many people can communicate or open up to researcher for making their society better and better.
In sum, To characterise any kind of society, we have to study or research major cities. There might be many factors which can improve research or characterise the society. So, I completely agree with the assertion that to characterise any kind of society, study on major cities is necessary because of their highly educational ratio, high population growth and etc. and with the help of it we can improve our society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'kind of', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24921630094 0.240241500013 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.16144200627 0.157235817809 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0940438871473 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0407523510972 0.0497285424764 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.064263322884 0.0444667217837 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.100313479624 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0156739811912 0.0406280797675 39% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.75215055472 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0485893416928 0.030933414821 157% => OK
Particles: 0.00313479623824 0.0016655270985 188% => OK
Determiners: 0.0548589341693 0.0997080785238 55% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0344827586207 0.0249443105267 138% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0266457680251 0.0148568991511 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3493.0 2732.02544248 128% => OK
No of words: 585.0 452.878318584 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97094017094 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9180050066 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25641025641 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.193162393162 0.200843997647 96% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131623931624 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75215055472 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 219.290929204 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.37264957265 0.48968727796 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.2366438505 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 36.0 20.6194690265 175% => OK
Sentence length: 16.25 23.380412469 70% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8047804386 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0277777778 141.124799967 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 23.380412469 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 0.674092028746 33% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.94800884956 141% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.21349557522 230% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.891025641 51.4728631049 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.37058823529 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400593677964 0.391690518653 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112492875311 0.123202303941 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0820504516512 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.487212736982 0.547984918172 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.133438266452 0.149214159877 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138574060832 0.161403998019 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885112035668 0.0892212321368 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.319594275481 0.385218514788 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.142916365644 0.0692045440612 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252731083772 0.275328986314 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118646550262 0.0653680567796 182% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.88274336283 369% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 7.22455752212 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 12.0 2.70907079646 443% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 27.0 13.5995575221 199% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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