To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Understanding the important characteristics of a society is a pivotal study, required to describe and analyze the society and its present and future impacts. This topic raises the issue whether it is necessary to study the major cities where the society under study, is prevalent, and if it will give some valuable outputs or not. Although, a society is not marked by its major cities, a society is self-sufficient and even if it present in minority, the inherited characteristics will sustain. Nevertheless, if we study their major cities, it would be easy to observe and study the characteristics of that particular society.
First of all, major cities imply the majority population of the individuals of society under consideration, making their way of life almost ubiquitous in that area. I would like to point out that if in any city, there are majority people from one particular society, they will follow their customs and traditions in more positive form, as it will be acknowledged, participated and followed by others too.
To illustrate, let us look at the example of Leh, a city in India, where majority population is of Buddhists. The place is in the state of Jammu and Kashmir, which has majority of Hindus and Muslims, this city stand outs for the fact that it is inherited by Budhhists. The monasteries, the culture, the behavior, is way too different from other nearby cities. In all areas, one can discern the chants, the mindfulness, and the other very innate characteristics of Budhhists. Hence, it is pretty obvious, since it is one of the major cities of Monks, one can understand the attributes belonging to them by simply visiting this city.
In conclusion, although there are many other ways to perceive the features of a particular society, this by far is the most blatant and agreeable way to do so. As long as societies continue to practice their traditions in their habitat, this conclusion will hold true.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'presents'?
Suggestion: presents
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'look', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'in conclusion', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219512195122 0.240241500013 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.138211382114 0.157235817809 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0840108401084 0.0880659088768 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0433604336043 0.0497285424764 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0542005420054 0.0444667217837 122% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124661246612 0.12292977631 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0271002710027 0.0406280797675 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00364433479 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0243902439024 0.030933414821 79% => OK
Particles: 0.00271002710027 0.0016655270985 163% => OK
Determiners: 0.105691056911 0.0997080785238 106% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0243902439024 0.0249443105267 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00813008130081 0.0148568991511 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1941.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 325.0 452.878318584 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97230769231 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.335384615385 0.366273622748 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267692307692 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.203076923077 0.200843997647 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.126153846154 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00364433479 2.79330140395 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.48968727796 107% => OK
Word variations: 54.4630408284 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6194690265 63% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.380412469 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8288862702 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.307692308 141.124799967 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 23.380412469 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.674092028746 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 51.7692307692 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.57471264368 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.423161125437 0.391690518653 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.173995008609 0.123202303941 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0584431537246 0.077325440228 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.653937603545 0.547984918172 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0664731311953 0.149214159877 45% => Sentences are similar to each other in a paragraph.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213140793405 0.161403998019 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687495458807 0.0892212321368 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.332208836385 0.385218514788 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0329559333128 0.0692045440612 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286727977188 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724821419792 0.0653680567796 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.4325221239 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 7.22455752212 97% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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