To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Even though people within a society have many things in common, their opinions and lifestyles may differ. Large societies especially, will have internal conflicts on how to run the government and its social values. Even though major cities are influential, many more important characteristics of a society lie within the small cities and villages
Compared to major cities like New York or Beijing, the surrounding smaller cities seem insignificant. But in total, small cities are where the majority of the population live. There are numerously more small cities then there are major ones, providing a much wider and comprehensive insight into their society. Visiting the major cities will only expose you to few varied groups of individuals that due to their close proximity, share similar ideas and lifestyles. This would only provide a narrow impression on chinese society and reduce China’s extemporaneous history to a simple line. To be exposed to the full range you need to visit the multiple groups of people that share large range of views and lifestyles.
A society’s complexities and roots do not lie in its major cities but in the lifestyles of the surrounding villages and small cities. Here you can learn about what created and supported the modern social values seen in the large cities. The enormous foundation that built the infrastructure and lifestyle that define the society as a whole. You can explore the ancient wars and hardship the people have endured. You can experience the values that shape the lives which hold it dear.
There is an argument to be made that cities have a large population density. This would expose you to many people and allow you to get an overall feel for what the society values. With most major cities, there a subpopulation of different people that would give you a range the opinions and culture within the society.
If it is your desire is to truly understand a society, then small cities provide the largest and deepest understanding of that society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
... There are numerously more small cities then there are major ones, providing a much ...
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Line 3, column 360, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...g the major cities will only expose you to few varied groups of individuals that d...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...groups of individuals that due to their close proximity, share similar ideas and lifestyles. Th...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.242506811989 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.136239782016 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.128065395095 0.0880659088768 145% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0354223433243 0.0497285424764 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0435967302452 0.0444667217837 98% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0762942779292 0.12292977631 62% => OK
Participles: 0.0217983651226 0.0406280797675 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75990843545 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0326975476839 0.030933414821 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103542234332 0.0997080785238 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0245231607629 0.0249443105267 98% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0299727520436 0.0148568991511 202% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2023.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 333.0 452.878318584 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.07507507508 6.0361032391 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357357357357 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243243243243 0.280924506359 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162162162162 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105105105105 0.132149295362 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75990843545 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504504504505 0.48968727796 103% => OK
Word variations: 52.1567876012 55.4138127331 94% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5882352941 23.380412469 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3819026465 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 141.124799967 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 23.380412469 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.294117647059 0.674092028746 44% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 43.9125596184 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.58227848101 1.64882698954 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.497004108127 0.391690518653 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117333635987 0.123202303941 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0525487192483 0.077325440228 68% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.571609529011 0.547984918172 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147476235271 0.149214159877 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.205265092363 0.161403998019 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893682299192 0.0892212321368 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346630493164 0.385218514788 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0532784160149 0.0692045440612 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.310942283698 0.275328986314 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892500588426 0.0653680567796 137% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.