To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The claim that to understand the most important characteristic of a society, one must study its major cities doesn't seems to be cogent. A society can be very diverse, different people, humongous cultures scattered in its different cities. Thus, simply studying the major cities will not be very helpful in giving a pellucid view to its important characterstics.
Consider, for example, India is a very diverse country having several major cities and at the same time myriad of people living in rural and other small region as well. People living in rural and urban areas have completely different lifestyle, customs and standards. For instance, rural people are mostly engaged in the agricultural sector. They are the ones who generally prefers to stay close to nature along the riverside or a place full of greenery and spent their entire life there only. These people are not some tech savvy people that one would usually see in the urban areas; where one can see technology as an indispensable thing for their living. Not only this, people living in urban are more decorous in their living standards. So, if one just extrapolates from the facts obtained from the major cities only, then the characteristics drawn for a particular society will not be complete, for sure.
To support further, society is amalgam of people of various different cultures, scattered in different parts of the country. Analysis cannot be simply drawn by just from few major cities. It may be possible that only a specific community is occupying majority of the important cities. In such case, it is vivid that drawing inferences by studying will not give a well-rounded result.
In addition, to understand a society is an arduous task. It requires a going into the abyss depth of understanding different people, different community and understanding their customs, rituals, living style etc. Thus, it demands be done diligently, meticulously; which one cannot achieve by going to few major cities but by meeting and understanding various people, various places, no matter how small or large they are, whether they are in the list of major cities or small rural area.
To sum up, inferences drawn from the major cities may provide a superficial glimpse of a society but it is in no way complete. If one really wants to be cognizant of the important characteristics then there is much more that is needed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...usly; which one cannot achieve by going to few major cities but by meeting and und...
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...a society but it is in no way complete. If one really wants to be cognizant of the...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.191011235955 0.240241500013 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.143820224719 0.157235817809 91% => OK
Adjectives: 0.148314606742 0.0880659088768 168% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0808988764045 0.0497285424764 163% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0337078651685 0.0444667217837 76% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110112359551 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0449438202247 0.0406280797675 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7835382972 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0224719101124 0.030933414821 73% => OK
Particles: 0.00224719101124 0.0016655270985 135% => OK
Determiners: 0.0831460674157 0.0997080785238 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0247191011236 0.0249443105267 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00898876404494 0.0148568991511 61% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2392.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 397.0 452.878318584 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02518891688 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.58838876751 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35516372796 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269521410579 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.173803526448 0.200843997647 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.125944584383 0.132149295362 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7835382972 2.79330140395 100% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 219.290929204 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496221662469 0.48968727796 101% => OK
Word variations: 54.0368442572 55.4138127331 98% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8947368421 23.380412469 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8928388958 59.4972553346 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.894736842 141.124799967 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8947368421 23.380412469 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.631578947368 0.674092028746 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 47.8468779 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.33913043478 1.64882698954 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386038141614 0.391690518653 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109498623705 0.123202303941 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0699758500394 0.077325440228 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.522017441914 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134605881148 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150759995318 0.161403998019 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842255719309 0.0892212321368 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.273070010124 0.385218514788 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0323325255178 0.0692045440612 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256643124048 0.275328986314 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580885160727 0.0653680567796 89% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.4325221239 77% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88274336283 184% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 7.22455752212 111% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 2.70907079646 295% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.5995575221 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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