To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Studying to major city for find out importance characteristics of all other cities it’s not give valid information. It’s an unwise if studying United States of America major cities like Texas, New York and Florida with small city like Kansas. Here mentioned all cities have different characteristics.
Studying important characteristics of major cities can’t be correlated with other cities it’s provide false information. For example, census of major city Texas has higher and can’t be correlated with small city with Kansas because Kansas is small city and population also less than major city like Texas.
Further, studying mere census can’t assume characteristics of society. People who stay at Texas they undoubtedly living expensive life style but who stay at Kansas they people can’t afford that much expensive living life style.
In conclusion, after study major cities important characteristics of a society if provide same information for major city and small city then it will show invalid information. For vivid information for most important characteristics of a society should study each city individually.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.335135135135 0.238963963785 140% => OK
Verbs: 0.135135135135 0.154291517835 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.167567567568 0.0886310499679 189% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0378378378378 0.0506014161523 75% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0162162162162 0.0449626384858 36% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151351351351 0.123526278965 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0432432432432 0.0379742944744 114% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.02879635422 2.82910677849 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00540540540541 0.0316879551592 17% => More infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0014075125626 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0324324324324 0.0950106342287 34% => More determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0108108108108 0.0245489744465 44% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0108108108108 0.0157978311181 68% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1141.0 2899.98275862 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 478.390804598 36% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 6.63372093023 6.0591788892 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.65681771538 78% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424418604651 0.369966551584 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261627906977 0.285172536893 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.186046511628 0.207245337619 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145348837209 0.136322040163 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02879635422 2.82910677849 107% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 234.298850575 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546511627907 0.492565540709 111% => OK
Word variations: 46.3803579071 56.8184620615 82% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 21.1264367816 43% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 19.1111111111 23.7468607788 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0657407303 62.0618507366 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 143.81877709 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 23.7468607788 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.728815259664 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.71264367816 0% => OK
Readability: 45.2739018088 52.2641144681 87% => OK
Elegance: 2.8 1.64547068916 170% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164999704081 0.39480681544 42% => More coherence wanted between essay topic and essay body.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129485863051 0.11556216369 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.109187190353 0.0736162880345 148% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.654978928043 0.531340600358 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188528660415 0.15197228837 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898224108731 0.158818324754 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481774542058 0.0851127212816 57% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.200963040599 0.388921930462 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.175550619325 0.0677916285025 259% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110563234037 0.28015025965 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560247940244 0.0610219844235 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.8591954023 55% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30459770115 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.96264367816 60% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.10632183908 74% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.93390804598 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.04597701149 98% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 15.0862068966 60% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 41.67 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 2.5 Out of 6