To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Major cities around the world have been developed with an intention to create a utopian society where every individual can prosper. This novel intention has naturally attracted large populations to settle in and around these cities with every person aspiring to make it big. This facilitates a plethora of cultures to meet in a single society.
A cross-section of this diverse population gives us an idea of the most important characteristics of the human society.
To give a native example from my country, I would like to mention the city ‘Bangalore’ where I was brought up throughout my childhood. Bangalore is one of the most important metropolitan cities in India and an important Information Technology hub. It is commonly referred to as the ‘Silicon Valley of India’. The humungous IT industry has wooed an assortment of people from different states and backgrounds from around the country.
My class at school had students from about 15 different states each with different cultural and social characteristics. My opinion is that , when you have such a diversified population , the database you study from the major cities is bound to reflect upon the entire society.
This example is similar to the analogy between sample and population in statistics. A quantity or quality derived from a sample is used to extrapolate to a the population ; provided the sample is chosen appropriately with equal representation from all sections of the population.
Major cities act like an ideal sample and hence can give us an idea of the important characteristics of the entire society.
This extrapolation can be achieved only when you consider major cities and not towns or villages as the database that you work on is more homogenous and endemic to that particular town or village.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22336769759 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22771732039 2.79657885939 115% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539518900344 0.4932671777 109% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.740449438202 270% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6219106807 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 5.21951772744 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14876596157 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568720068646 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740330810399 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830026818454 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656267725954 0.0667264976115 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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