To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Major cities are important parts of a society. The people living in these cities build culture of a society, they are clear signs of whole society. Some people believe that if we want to know a society well, we should study its important cities; others disagree. In my view, important cities are good sources for drawing a good design of characteristics of a society for three important reasons.
First, when we want to know a society, we should study sources building culture of a society. The main objective of all universities are developing culture of society and in major cities you can find some prestigious universities working on not only city’s culture but also society’s culture. Getting information from these universities, you can know a society more efficient.
Second, in major and big cities, you can find a variety of people coming from all over the country, the ones that all together building characteristics of a society. It is hard to go all over the country for finding their specific customs, culture, etc. so it would be very helpful to find a piece of each in a place.
In addition, this point must be considered that the major cities are good paragons for small cities, suburbs, etc. In fact, the goals of each small cities is developing like major cities. The characteristics of a society are established in these cities. Therefore, studying major give us a realistic perspective of where whole society is and where it will be in the future.
In sum, some people may think that there are other sources for studying a society while I think that the best way for knowing a society is getting information from important cities where they are centers of a society. We should study where that can get information more efficient and more realistic.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in addition, in fact, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91749174917 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81491647331 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 215.323595506 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455445544554 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 473.4 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.0474618867 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.21951772744 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267591734081 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100061690796 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728406972543 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153610515524 0.150359130593 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736324172802 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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