The wellbeing of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
People in power are often endowed with the responsibility of looking after the welfare of their society. This case is more true in case of politicians who are elected by the people,for the people. Many a times it is seen that once coming into power these representatives often forget the promises they made and do not perform the duties assigned to them properly. Coming into power and gaining authority gives them the freedom of exploiting the powers they have with them for personal gains. This altogether leads to them deviating from the main course with nobody keeping a check on their activities.
When people start questioning, it makes the authorities more vigilant and careful about the actions they undertake. This is particularly useful to prevent and stop corruption among various departments of the ruling authority. For instance: A certain locality of a city does not get proper supply of water.Unless or until the people complain and question the concerned authorities, how will the problem be sorted?Or if a person suspects that there is lot of bribery happening in a certain department of an organisation, he/she can always question the authorities. This would not only make them more careful but could also help reduce those cases further.
With more and more countries opting for democracy, people are given right to information. This right helps them to know anything about any government organisation or about any political figure. They can also use this right to know where the funds collected as taxes are being used or if they are used at all or not. These sort of things helps the citizens and members of the society keep a check on the authorities. Not only such actions help run a society or community smoothly but efficiently too. More work would be done for their betterment, be it any field : medical, roads, schools or providing basic amenities such as electricity and water etc.
In schools, a teacher’s duty is to keep an eye on their pupils and to guide them to a right path. They do so for the welfare of their students, to give them a better future. Keeping a check on whether they complete their homework or how good they are performing in sports or other activities helps the child be more sincere and remain dedicated. This very basis applies to the society as a whole too where their role is to act like a teacher, just to make sure that the people in power do what they ought to. This helps them keep on track.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...oliticians who are elected by the people,for the people. Many a times it is seen tha...
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Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...cted by the people,for the people. Many a times it is seen that once coming into power ...
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Line 1, column 566, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'keeps'.
Suggestion: keeps
...iating from the main course with nobody keeping a check on their activities. When pe...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Unless
...ity does not get proper supply of water.Unless or until the people complain and questi...
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Line 3, column 413, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Or
...orities, how will the problem be sorted?Or if a person suspects that there is lot ...
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Line 5, column 317, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'These nulls'?
Suggestion: This sort; These nulls
...used or if they are used at all or not. These sort of things helps the citizens and member...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'for instance', 'sort of', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219827586207 0.240241500013 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.174568965517 0.157235817809 111% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0603448275862 0.0880659088768 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0603448275862 0.0497285424764 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0603448275862 0.0444667217837 136% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116379310345 0.12292977631 95% => OK
Participles: 0.051724137931 0.0406280797675 127% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66871247938 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0301724137931 0.030933414821 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.118534482759 0.0997080785238 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0150862068966 0.0249443105267 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0150862068966 0.0148568991511 102% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2461.0 2732.02544248 90% => OK
No of words: 425.0 452.878318584 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79058823529 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.291764705882 0.366273622748 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.223529411765 0.280924506359 80% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.150588235294 0.200843997647 75% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105882352941 0.132149295362 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66871247938 2.79330140395 96% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 219.290929204 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531764705882 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 60.9722575927 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6194690265 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.25 23.380412469 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1043780104 59.4972553346 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.05 141.124799967 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 23.380412469 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 43.6029411765 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.31386861314 1.64882698954 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391290764145 0.391690518653 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0918363146859 0.123202303941 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0609321044725 0.077325440228 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.474159275195 0.547984918172 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.131496589828 0.149214159877 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148111825277 0.161403998019 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.096850257796 0.0892212321368 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.380998580135 0.385218514788 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0206048087505 0.0692045440612 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287315732841 0.275328986314 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644738415235 0.0653680567796 99% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum three arguments wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.