While some leaders in government, sports, industry, and other areas attribute their success to a well-developed sense of competition, a society can better prepare its young people for leadership by instilling in them a sense of cooperation
Young people are the future of any country. The progress of any country depends on these young minds. So moulding the young generation in a proper way becomes very necessary. Instilling good qualities in them is a surest way of ensuring the goodness of society by preparing good leaders.
It is rightly said that good leaders not only themselves go ahead, but lift the people surrounding them.Generosity and co-operation are a distinct trait of people who make good leaders. These qualities get be impressed on their minds in their youth. Youth is the most inluential part of everybody's life. Things learnt in youth go a long way in shaping the character of a person.
In any field the surest way to progress is to work together as a team. A single person is not capable of learning all the things, but together, as a team, people have created miracles. For example, Henry Ford, he himself not being so technically talented, knew how to harness individual capabilities. This in turn led to Ford's success.
Consider the game of cricket. Here team work and co-operation are very critical.Internal competition within team members can prove deleterious for the team's success. Some players are part of the team and some players are kept out of the team for matches depending on the player's form, health etc. So the players should not take this being kept out of the team personally and think of the big picture. Here, the team captain has to play a very crucial role. He is responsible for maintaining healthy spirit among team members. And he can do so only if he himself has the qualities of co-operation instilled in him.
Similarly, government of any country cannot be ruled by a single person. It takes many delegates to take responsibilities of their respective zones and work in symbiosis with other members to achieve the country's unified goal.
However, sometimes competition creates some good outcomes. Consider the telecom industry. Once upon a time call charges were large. Both incoming and outgoing was charged exorbitantly. But the emergence of many companies provied incentives for companies to outperform others. This, in turn, motivating them to develop newer technologies at affordale prices.
So I agree that instilling qualities of symbiosis among young people will help them in becoming good leaders. But a spirit of healthy competition also needs to be engraved on their minds.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, similarly, so, still, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2027.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 407.0 442.535393258 92% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98034398034 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81572052776 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525798525799 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0413443025 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8965517241 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0344827586 23.4991977007 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.20689655172 5.21951772744 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153098198685 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366336619472 0.0831039109588 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318441296718 0.0758088955206 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.074310109083 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287061270232 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 12.1743820225 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 100.480337079 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => OK
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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