Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for t

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Suggestion: , youth
It is said,youth defines and writes the future for tomor...
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...ines and writes the future for tomorrow.It is indeed true that youth should target...
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Suggestion: , realisitic
...rue that youth should target a long-term,realisitic goal rather than seeking a goal possess...
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...essed with instant fame and recognition.A long term goal not only horizons the we...
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Suggestion: Also
...tes in upbringing of society and nation.Also,given exceptions,it must not be ignored...
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...in upbringing of society and nation.Also,given exceptions,it must not be ignored that ...
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...society and nation.Also,given exceptions,it must not be ignored that targeting an i...
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Suggestion: , provided
...not help in promoting overall prosperity,provided undertaking a rational and benevolent g...
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Suggestion: When
...ues and tends to eradicate them as well.When a young mind undertakes a challenge or ...
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Suggestion: , he
...ng issue and is able to fathom and solve,he/she is termed as an inspiration in our ...
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Suggestion: , later
... termed as an inspiration in our society,later resulting in as astounding entrepreneur...
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Suggestion: , have
...reneurs. This reflects they are diligent,have ability to take risks,audacity to chall...
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Suggestion: , audacity
... are diligent,have ability to take risks,audacity to challenge self and even propose new ...
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Suggestion: For
...allenge self and even propose new ideas.For example,Microsoft founder Bill Gates an...
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Suggestion: , Microsoft
...f and even propose new ideas.For example,Microsoft founder Bill Gates and late CEO of Appl...
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Suggestion: Steve
...er Bill Gates and late CEO of Apple Inc.Steve Jobs,as a young mind,proposed numerate ...
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Suggestion: , as
...tes and late CEO of Apple Inc.Steve Jobs,as a young mind,proposed numerate out of b...
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Suggestion: , proposed
... of Apple Inc.Steve Jobs,as a young mind,proposed numerate out of box ideas and were able...
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Suggestion: In
...ith several obstructions and challenges.In addition,Hans Zimmer from Frankfurt,Ger...
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Suggestion: , Hans
... obstructions and challenges.In addition,Hans Zimmer from Frankfurt,Germany and A.R.R...
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Suggestion: , Germany
...s.In addition,Hans Zimmer from Frankfurt,Germany and A.R.Rahmaan from Chennai,India,both...
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Suggestion: Rahmaan
...s Zimmer from Frankfurt,Germany and A.R.Rahmaan from Chennai,India,both were predetermi...
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Suggestion: , India
...urt,Germany and A.R.Rahmaan from Chennai,India,both were predetermined to learn music ...
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Suggestion: Today
...rmined to learn music from an early age.Today,they are the pioneers of modern music i...
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Suggestion: , they
...d to learn music from an early age.Today,they are the pioneers of modern music indust...
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Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'mean'
Suggestion: mean
...led with recognition does not certainly means taking a short-term goal.Sure,there are...
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Suggestion: Sure
...ertainly means taking a short-term goal.Sure,there are temporary perks which are yie...
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Suggestion: , there
...inly means taking a short-term goal.Sure,there are temporary perks which are yielded b...
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Suggestion: , but
...ry perks which are yielded by such goals,but these certainly do not provide human sa...
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Suggestion: Examples
...vide human satisfaction and inner peace.Examples,famous golfer Tiger Woods was inspected...
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Suggestion: , famous
...an satisfaction and inner peace.Examples,famous golfer Tiger Woods was inspected and pl...
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Suggestion: Los
... which led to abomination of his career.Los Angeles born Shia LaBeouf, starred in o...
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Suggestion: , Transformers
...of the best science fiction movie series,Transformers,was accused for assaulting his neighbor...
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Suggestion: It
...son like blocking his path with his car.It can be concluded that fame played a maj...
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Suggestion: Stating
...is not every time negligent or heedless.Stating an exception,Lebrown James,a famous Ame...
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Suggestion: , Lebrown
...gligent or heedless.Stating an exception,Lebrown James,a famous American basketball play...
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...dless.Stating an exception,Lebrown James,a famous American basketball player from ...
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Suggestion: , helped
...erican basketball player from Cleaveland,helped almost 800 children to graduate from hi...
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Suggestion: Similarly
...0 children to graduate from high school.Similarly,a young popular band,One Direction, set...
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...n to graduate from high school.Similarly,a young popular band,One Direction, set v...
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...gh school.Similarly,a young popular band,One Direction, set various concerts and col...
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Suggestion: $340000
...t various concerts and collected almost 340000$ in support for cancer.Hence,having fame...
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Suggestion: Hence
...ed almost 340000$ in support for cancer.Hence,having fame depends on ones self attitu...
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Suggestion: , having
...most 340000$ in support for cancer.Hence,having fame depends on ones self attitude,weat...
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Suggestion: , weather
...aving fame depends on ones self attitude,weather to continue with a superfluous path or ...
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Suggestion: , a
...th or to undertake a benign one. Thus,a long-term goal surely helps benefiting ...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to benefit' or 'benefit'.
Suggestion: to benefit; benefit
.... Thus,a long-term goal surely helps benefiting the human world,provided the goal is ra...
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Suggestion: , provided
... surely helps benefiting the human world,provided the goal is rational.Similar case is wi...
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Suggestion: Similar
...man world,provided the goal is rational.Similar case is with the individual undertaking...
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Suggestion: It
...l undertaking taking a fame packed path.It is often said,the biggest challenge abo...
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Suggestion: , the
...king a fame packed path.It is often said,the biggest challenge about success is the ...
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Suggestion: Thus
...ut success is the ability to keep quiet.Thus,it may be a long term or short term goa...
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Suggestion: , it
...uccess is the ability to keep quiet.Thus,it may be a long term or short term goal,t...
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...it may be a long term or short term goal,the results and ramifications ultimately de...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'similarly', 'so', 'thus', 'well', 'for example', 'in addition']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.260628465804 0.240241500013 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.192236598891 0.157235817809 122% => OK
Adjectives: 0.109057301294 0.0880659088768 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0443622920518 0.0497285424764 89% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0258780036969 0.0444667217837 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.097966728281 0.12292977631 80% => OK
Participles: 0.0591497227357 0.0406280797675 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.7938789806 2.79330140395 136% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0240295748614 0.030933414821 78% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0887245841035 0.0997080785238 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00739371534196 0.0249443105267 30% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00554528650647 0.0148568991511 37% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3087.0 2732.02544248 113% => OK
No of words: 463.0 452.878318584 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.66738660907 6.0361032391 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.58838876751 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.403887688985 0.366273622748 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.328293736501 0.280924506359 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.241900647948 0.200843997647 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.19222462203 0.132149295362 145% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.7938789806 2.79330140395 136% => OK
Unique words: 285.0 219.290929204 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61555075594 0.48968727796 126% => OK
Word variations: 80.6654670531 55.4138127331 146% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6194690265 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 77.1666666667 23.380412469 330% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 163.096767459 59.4972553346 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 514.5 141.124799967 365% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.1666666667 23.380412469 330% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 0.674092028746 272% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 54.0 5.21349557522 1036% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 109.996040317 51.4728631049 214% => OK
Elegance: 1.59154929577 1.64882698954 97% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36190281151 0.391690518653 92% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150149909228 0.123202303941 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0447970432721 0.077325440228 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.916325594584 0.547984918172 167% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.148565576804 0.149214159877 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.200442822646 0.161403998019 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388970500858 0.0892212321368 44% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.177770104601 0.385218514788 46% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.07704009123 0.0692045440612 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210860531476 0.275328986314 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511097462576 0.0653680567796 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.