Young people should be encouraged to pursue long term, realistic goals rather than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Goals or achievements can be classified into two type i.e. long term and short term goals. It is quiet easy to achieve short term goals as they often require less efforts and are often characterized by temporary fame. While, long term goals as the name suggests requires long period for achieving them. The thought that young people should be encouraged to pursue long term goals holds true to some extent because, they are remembered for decades.
As the youth of country is responsible for its progress, short term goals will not show much improvement whereas, achievement of long term goals can provide tremendous contributions. The fact that long term goals should be encouraged is necessary because its effect lasts for long duration for example, if a youngster is involved for stealing or hacking someone’s credit card which will provide him with immediate success but the impact will be temporary on the other hand, if the youngster develops or invents something then, he will not only be recognized for ages but also will contribute towards nations progress.
It is natural in humans that we want immediate fame and success because of the lust but, it will provide only temporary satisfaction however if we want to be successful and be highlighted in front of whole world then, long term goals are the only solution. As in case of “Usain Bolt” the fastest man on earth, is recognized in the whole world because of his dedication and achievements..
As, one can’t predict future and also long term goals can be sometimes highly unrealistic people mostly favor short term goals as they feel satisfied and don’t have patience for waiting for long time. Although this is true, long term goals will always be beneficial. It is advantageous to divide your long term goals into many short term goals and achieve them step by step.
In sum, youth should be encouraged to aim for realistic long term goals as it will surely bring success and fame that will last for ages.
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...ccess and fame that will last for ages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'whereas', 'while', 'for example', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255936675462 0.240241500013 107% => OK
Verbs: 0.155672823219 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.131926121372 0.0880659088768 150% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0422163588391 0.0497285424764 85% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0474934036939 0.0444667217837 107% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126649076517 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0369393139842 0.0406280797675 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65153017047 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0158311345646 0.030933414821 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0369393139842 0.0997080785238 37% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0422163588391 0.0249443105267 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00527704485488 0.0148568991511 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2014.0 2732.02544248 74% => OK
No of words: 336.0 452.878318584 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.99404761905 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300595238095 0.366273622748 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.238095238095 0.280924506359 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.200843997647 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130952380952 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65153017047 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 219.290929204 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508928571429 0.48968727796 104% => OK
Word variations: 52.9536223102 55.4138127331 96% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6194690265 58% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 23.380412469 120% => OK
Sentence length SD: 119.439286064 59.4972553346 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.833333333 141.124799967 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.380412469 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.674092028746 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 51.8095238095 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.70967741935 1.64882698954 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349993820245 0.391690518653 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140960290771 0.123202303941 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0820642196286 0.077325440228 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.652446993269 0.547984918172 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180457135185 0.149214159877 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185170376192 0.161403998019 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777653578117 0.0892212321368 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.288167971701 0.385218514788 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0533448660543 0.0692045440612 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243178791343 0.275328986314 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926615636204 0.0653680567796 142% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.4325221239 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.30420353982 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88274336283 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 13.5995575221 74% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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