the bar chart shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. the pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.write a short report for a university lecturer describing the info

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the bar chart shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. the pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

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The bar chart describes the predicted sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey, while the pie chart shows the estimated market share for two companies.

The most striking feature from the bar chart is both Mango Co. And Jack&Jones Co will increase their sales. Furthermore, Mango Co will start at 150,,000 pairs in january increasing by approximately 350,000 pairs in august. The amount of sales will remain stable from august to november in around 500,000 pairs and increase 20% in december. Meanwhile, TheJack&Jones Co will begin the year at 450,000 pairs and falling 50% in the next month, but getting upward trend until june. In june, the sales of Jack&Jones Co reaching 400,000 pairs and stabilize until august. In december, the sales incline for twofolds, approximately 900,000 pairs.

It can be seen from the pie chart that Jack&Jones Co is estimated obtain one-third of all market, while The Mango Co has only 20% market share.

Overall, Both sales and market share of Jack&Jones Co are higher than The Mango co.

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