The chart below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australian share of Japanese tourist market.
The given vertical and line graph depict the figure of Japanese tourists commuting oversea in the period of 10 years and Australian's share related to Japanese tourists market.
In the first graph,it can be clearly seen that the number of tourists travelling in 1995 was maximum about 16 million rather than other years.From 1985 to 1990,the figure of it followed an increasing trend,rising from 5 to 11 millions.Next,the number of Japanese tourists leveled out at about 11 million between 1990 to 1991.Finally,from 1991 to 1995,the figure of it upsurged remarkably from 11 to 15 million.
The second graph illustrates the percentage of Australian's share of Japan's tourists market.Firstly,from 1985 to 1988,the proportion of share elevated radically from about 2 to 5 percent.After having dip in 1989,the percentage of it from 1989 to 1994,hiked significantly from about 4 to 6 percent.
It is,therefore,clear that in this given period the figure of tourists and percentage of share had rise three times more than the initial period of 1985.
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