The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The chart describes how much of leisure time men and women of different employment statuses preferred to use in 1998-1999.
Looking at the chart, we can clearly see that although men of the same employment statuses used more leisure time than women, there were a couple of categories where the leisure time is observed to be used by women only.
Most of the leisure time enjoyed by both men and women was recorded for unemployed and retired people, for men both being 80 hour and for women around 70 hours per week. The people who worked full time, used about 45 hours (men) and 38 hours (women) ...
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 177 200
No. of Characters: 815 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.647 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.605 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.422 2.4
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No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 39 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 24 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 8.564 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.867 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.256 0.07
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