the charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000,and the martial status of Adult Americans in two of years.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic illustrates the trends of marriage and divorce rate between 1970 and 2000 in USA of the year.
Overall, it can be seen from the two graphic that adult Americans to marriage increased in 1970 than 2000, and divorce was low in 1970 than 2000.
In between 1970 and 2000, divorce and widow obviously less than never marriage and married. Where divorce in 1970 until 2000 fluctuated as 1 million and married in 1970 was 2.5 million declines slightly to 2000, and the people got married just 2 millions.
Fascinatingly there where divorce in 1970 until 2000 still stabile in 1 million people, widowed in 1970 until 2000 decline and never married rose steadily from 15% - 20% of adults.
In conclusion, it could be concluded that adult people with divorce rose slightly in 1970 to 2000. However, this married was slightly lower than 1970.
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I've read this report. I think you should pay particular attention to testbig's commentaries. To me, I want you to highlight this sentence (read: a subject and a verb agreement): "Where divorce in 1970 until 2000 fluctuated as 1 million and married in 1970 was 2.5 million declines slightly to 2000, and the people got married just 2 millions."
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Sentence: The graphic illustrates the trends of marriage and divorce rate between 1970 and 2000 in USA of the year.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to graphic and illustrates
Sentence: Overall, it can be seen from the two graphic that adult Americans to marriage increased in 1970 than 2000, and divorce was low in 1970 than 2000.
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